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Shafted

Bobby Aiken was proud to be Scotch. As a pole-vaulter he was top-notch. But on one faulty try he became a soprano guy, having been poled crack-on in the crotch.

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Date: 3/25/2016 8:04:00 PM
Another very good one. The meter on this one was perfect almost all the way through.
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Date: 2/5/2016 2:52:00 AM
AWESOME, Paul... Well not for the one shafted. LINDA
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Paul Schneiter
Date: 2/7/2016 1:00:00 PM
Linda: It's about 100 light years from "Indian Ink," but please know of my gratitude for your kind, gracious comment. (Follow up response.)
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Date: 2/7/2016 11:01:00 AM
Thank you, LINDA. I treasure words of praise from you. hugs x x x
Date: 1/31/2016 9:11:00 PM
G'day Paul ... when watching these pole vaulters, I can see your thoughts are similar to mine - Lindsay
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Date: 2/2/2016 10:11:00 PM
I wonder if it has ever happened. Perhaps we should take a POLL. Thanks for commenting, Lindsay. I appreciate it.

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