Shady Castle

My pain is invisible 
But my tears are burning my eyes 
One day I'll forget 
One day I'll smile 
I know someday I'll meet you again 
But today I'm crying your absence a river 
In my shady castle.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Parmale Avatar
April 14, 2017 at 10:37 PM
What a gem.... Outstanding....I am crying your absence a river... Simply superb...
Sands Avatar
October 18, 2016 at 4:02 PM
Good writing. I can identify with this.
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October 18, 2016 at 4:05 PM
Thank you very much. Unfortunately i couldn't upload the official mp3, You can find it on YouTube and soundcloud. Cheers ??
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