SHADOWY WHISPERS

SHADOWY WHISPERS
unseen voice weaves lies
shadowy whispers linger
truth frays like old thread

©2025 Sara Etgen-Baker

12th gradebetrayaltrusttruthsenryu

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Bill Baker

Date: 7/17/2025 4:39:00 PM

The picture sets your Senryu up well, my dearest friend. Your words are strangely haunting. (I think) Cheers! Bill

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 7/17/2025 4:43:00 PM

glad you felt the haunting feeling....hugs, me

Anne Winter

Date: 7/17/2025 2:16:00 AM

This is spooky in a thrilling way...wow! Brilliant!

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 7/17/2025 12:10:00 PM

thank you, Anne, for visiting and for your encouraging comments. have a pleasant day

Joe Dimino

Date: 7/16/2025 6:26:00 PM

Excellent image. I am going to check out Nightcafe studio. Very spooky. Reminds me of Coffeebreak Thrillers. Love that stuff!

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 7/17/2025 12:09:00 PM

thanks for your visit, Joe, and for your comments. I've never heard of Coffeebreak Thrillers...will need to check it out. enjoy your day!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/16/2025 5:02:00 PM

Sad when truth frays like an old thread. A scary picture and a feeling of eeriness in the lines. Thank you for sharing this with us. Sara K

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 7/16/2025 5:07:00 PM

thank you, Sara, for stopping by. I'm glad you caught the feeling of eeriness. I was hoping for that. Appreciate you, Sara B

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