Shadowy Scavengers - Contest

Shadowy Scavengers 

The darkest hour of the  hallowed night 
Wake up the blood dried shadows with
Unfulfilled desires rotting in  purgatory
Wriggle out of their graves to earth flying
To  their unwanted descendants' homes
To fill them with fearful reminders that
Their ancestors are connected through blood ties
Beware of the denizens of the night!

Crosses and candles at the door
Scare these lifeless invisible parchments away
Thresholds laden with goodies satiate these 
One night scavengers howling with the wind
Gifting and treating the tiny devilish vampires
Purge them of their undoings and guilt ridden lives
All the empty hungry souls are tricked 
To the golden ladder of salvation to heaven


EIGHTH
Balveen Cheema
October 18, 2015
Contest: Halloween- Prompt-2
Sponsor: Bev Smith

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 11/1/2015 11:15:00 PM
Congrats on ur superb win with this awesome write Balveen!
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/2/2015 5:40:00 AM
Upma, thank you so much! Balveen
Date: 11/1/2015 6:21:00 PM
What a richly descriptive poem! Congratulations on your well-deserved win! Janice
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/2/2015 5:41:00 AM
Janice, thanks for your visit and appreciation! Balveen
Date: 11/1/2015 11:04:00 AM
Balveen, congratulations. SKAT
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/1/2015 11:06:00 AM
Thanks, dear Skat!
Date: 11/1/2015 8:14:00 AM
Well done Balveen, congratulations.
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/1/2015 9:52:00 AM
Many thanks Richard!
Date: 11/1/2015 3:07:00 AM
Just a great write about those little monsters that we see so clearly only once a year. Congrats on the win.
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/1/2015 3:18:00 AM
Thanks Dan! We imagine to see them once a year and they give us so many opportunities to write about them!! Lucky us, Dan!
Date: 11/1/2015 12:51:00 AM
Wonderful description of the Samhain festival when the line between realms becomes week and dead souls can walk the earth.
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/1/2015 1:05:00 AM
Thanks James! You've done spledidly well in this competition. Congrats!
Date: 10/31/2015 4:38:00 PM
Very dark and somber, Balveen. I enjoyed reading this! Congratulations on your win! Hugs, Sandra
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/1/2015 12:56:00 AM
Thanks Sandra! You never forget to congratulate! Love, Balveen
Date: 10/20/2015 3:57:00 PM
this used the atmosphere of darkness that the early celebrators of Halloween must have felt. They were living even before the dark ages not understanding things about life and nature and for that reason Halloween was born. I enjoyed this.
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 10/20/2015 9:50:00 PM
Thanks Andrea!
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