Shadows On the Cave Wall

The poem that can describe
Just how your soul can touch mine
Is nothing short of a miracle
An inspiration divine.

For all models are incorrect;
All equations fall short.
All words can’t quite reflect,
To describe a thing does distort.

At best, a word is just a symbol,
To weave shadows into solidity.
It is a challenge not so simple
To expose the latent reality.

Glimpsed in the corner of the eye
Steal glance from cave walls to the flame.
All that moves us from inside
The spark from which we came.

Blinding pyre, inchoate conflagration.
Colors all, none, eyes are awed.
Search in vain for a description,
Perhaps the unseeable face of God.

3/5/16
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Haight Avatar
May 21, 2016 at 3:40 PM
Deep and lovely, Tom. Congratulations on your win. 7, Sandra
Quigley Avatar
May 21, 2016 at 6:00 PM
Thanks, Sandra!
Negron Flores Avatar
May 20, 2016 at 2:11 PM
Congratulations Tom on the placement of the contest
Quigley Avatar
May 20, 2016 at 5:11 PM
Thank you for hosting, and I appreciate the placement!
A   Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 6:32 AM
Thank you for the reply
Quigley Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 9:19 AM
De nada!
A   Avatar
March 5, 2016 at 9:36 PM
Wow... the moment and imagery are deep. Linda
Quigley Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 5:36 AM
Thanks, Linda!
Palli Avatar
March 5, 2016 at 6:58 AM
Absolutely beautiful! Excellent work.
Quigley Avatar
March 5, 2016 at 10:08 AM
Thank you!
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