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Shadows On the Cave Wall

The poem that can describe Just how your soul can touch mine Is nothing short of a miracle An inspiration divine. For all models are incorrect; All equations fall short. All words can’t quite reflect, To describe a thing does distort. At best, a word is just a symbol, To weave shadows into solidity. It is a challenge not so simple To expose the latent reality. Glimpsed in the corner of the eye Steal glance from cave walls to the flame. All that moves us from inside The spark from which we came. Blinding pyre, inchoate conflagration. Colors all, none, eyes are awed. Search in vain for a description, Perhaps the unseeable face of God. 3/5/16

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Date: 5/21/2016 3:40:00 PM
Deep and lovely, Tom. Congratulations on your win. 7, Sandra
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Tom Quigley
Date: 5/21/2016 6:00:00 PM
Thanks, Sandra!
Date: 5/20/2016 2:11:00 PM
Congratulations Tom on the placement of the contest
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Tom Quigley
Date: 5/20/2016 5:11:00 PM
Thank you for hosting, and I appreciate the placement!
Date: 3/6/2016 6:32:00 AM
Thank you for the reply
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Tom Quigley
Date: 3/6/2016 9:19:00 AM
De nada!
Date: 3/5/2016 9:36:00 PM
Wow... the moment and imagery are deep. Linda
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Tom Quigley
Date: 3/6/2016 5:36:00 AM
Thanks, Linda!
Date: 3/5/2016 6:58:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful! Excellent work.
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Tom Quigley
Date: 3/5/2016 10:08:00 AM
Thank you!

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