Shadows of Yesterday

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He said he knew your heart; but didn't bother to look. And then bragged to his friends; one glance was all it took. Your childhood fantasies warped reality's truth. And hope's polished mirror; show delusions of youth. Tangled in a web of lies; your heart struggles to cope. For paper-dreams crumble; when built only of hope. Shadows of yesterday cast doubt on tomorrow. For it's hard to conceal such anguish and sorrow. Time dulls truth's cutting-edge; numbing your inner pain. But it may take a while, before you smile again.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 3/6/2018 8:34:00 PM
"He swore he knew your heart yet didn't even look." Bringing back memories... well portrayed lies and deceit, Emile.
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Date: 3/7/2018 8:59:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 6/30/2015 12:35:00 AM
Wonderful win. SKAT
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Date: 6/30/2015 9:21:00 AM
Thanks SKAT, as always I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 6/29/2015 8:09:00 PM
Yes, Emile, us men can be a shallow bunch, with a sometimes throwaway attitude to the fairer sex. Lovely piece. Well done. Regards, Viv
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Date: 6/30/2015 9:20:00 AM
Thanks Viv, as always I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 6/24/2015 9:28:00 AM
Emile, this is a well written thought provoking poem.I'm glad I stopped by to view this 7 piece:)Alexis
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Date: 6/24/2015 4:50:00 PM
Thanks Alexis, as always I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 6/23/2015 1:36:00 PM
enjoyed he feel of mystery highlighted in this piece, emile.... a truly grand verse with an intriguing end note.. note
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Date: 6/23/2015 1:44:00 PM
Thanks Nette, your support is appreciated. Emile.
Date: 6/23/2015 11:34:00 AM
I enjoyed the emotive feel of this one..I am glad that I chose it to read today..It has good flow, rhythm, and rhyme..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Emile Pinet
Date: 6/23/2015 1:43:00 PM
Thanks Sara, your visits are always appreciated. Emile.
Date: 6/23/2015 9:18:00 AM
Hello Emile, Very well-done here Sir! One can sense quite well the message and emotion of this write. Time is indeed a palliative, but deep emotional scars in life's run may never be perfectly smoothed over. This one's a "7" + FAV for me. Excellent Work!! Best Always, Gary
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Emile Pinet
Date: 6/23/2015 1:42:00 PM
Thanks so much Gary, your kind words have brought a smile to my day. Emile.
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