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Silhouettes dance on the grass Whispery and lissome, Haunting the shadows of noon With reminders of beauty When we were struggling to write That phrase, verse, haiku Lovely words gripping hearts With faith and hope and love Kindness breathed on the soul In poetry from personal thoughts Details of all that we’ve known Through light cresting the darkness Inspired By A Translation Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Malabika Ray Choudhury November 10, 2021 Inspired by the poem, Any Liquid Poured into a Vessel… by Olzhas Suleimenov, a Russian poet Any liquid, poured into a vessel, rushes to take that vessel’s form but the word entering the depths of the human soul defines it with its own form. Night deforms darkness with its motifs. In every horse there is a great horse. Always, everywhere – any voice may exceed the bounds of a terrible chorus. By entering the world we change the world. It is a skin; we are its skeleton. My world, flickering, coruscating, like a cosmos, assumes the shape of the WORD. The smoke glitters. The last book has been burnt. Yet eternal is the symbol above the ashes of the letters, over yurts, over cooking stoves, over SOUND that is warped by the blueprint of ideas.

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Date: 12/14/2021 3:52:00 PM
I never heard of this Russian poet, but wow, amazing stuff and it really inspired you. BIG congrats on your win, Regina
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Date: 12/14/2021 8:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Shadows of Dreams" is a wonderful write. Enjoy your win with blessings....................
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Date: 12/14/2021 5:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your well-deserved win. You created a lovely poem! Thank you for participating. Love ~ Mala
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Date: 12/13/2021 9:49:00 PM
Wonderful work. The meaning and feeling is preserved in tact. Congratulations!
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Date: 11/10/2021 7:16:00 PM
Amazing to me, how've you've woven this all together, Regina! Tremendous effort will equal commensurate reward! Remarkable! thanks, Gershon
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Date: 11/10/2021 7:35:00 AM
Very nice, Regina. The lines and images of YOUR poem were wonderful. It's so exciting to turn what you see into haiku, a sonnet, or any kind of verse. The experience is well-captured.
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Date: 11/10/2021 7:34:00 AM
Wow! Tremendous take on the contest!
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Book: Shattered Sighs