Shadows In Candlelight

Feeble and hunched over
his movement stumbles
as shuffling feet echo
in the shadows
of a candle-lit
forgotten church
as the old priest
performs his sacred rituals
to a few faithful followers


A commitment to the cloth
harbourer of hidden secrets
an unclaimed inheritance
no longer passed on
the last remaining elders
keepers of unwanted wisdom
take their secrets
to the grave
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Walsh Avatar
January 8, 2011 at 4:43 AM
I have written on this topic alot also, Eaken - this one captures the truth of the tragedy within the church. You are a great poet - glad to have come across you. I am from Tramore - and actually spent the New Year in Greystones with friends of ours. A friend of mine sent me an email about your work on Poetry Soup and asked if I had come across you - she loved your work. She said that you had written a piece on Woodstown! We are in a writing group together. Cheers to you. Liz
Dietrich Avatar
January 1, 2011 at 12:36 AM
This one sounds eery. It reminded me of The classic story, The Lottery for some reason!
Brown Avatar
December 30, 2010 at 4:21 AM
I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry this morning Eiken. I will be back after the New Year to read more of your poetry. Wishing you a very Happy New Year. Love, Carol
Haick Avatar
December 29, 2010 at 6:01 PM
This is so sad to me Eiken, especially at a time when the world needs solid wisdom. Thanks for your kind comments. Congratulations for your win in your first contest here and once again, welcome to PS! Love, Audrey
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