Shadows At Sundown

shadows at sundown standing in the flaming frame lover’s silhouette — ‘twixt ebon bike wheels he’s posed heel’s elation, she’s preened 12/16/2020
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Krutsinger Avatar
December 17, 2020 at 7:05 AM
It sounds like a dangerously volatile situation.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 17, 2020 at 11:02 AM
Riiight!? ;)
Buhagiar Avatar
December 16, 2020 at 10:56 PM
If only I could paint, this would have been great. ~~
Rodrigues Avatar
December 17, 2020 at 4:22 AM
Thank you :)
Wolf Avatar
December 16, 2020 at 4:55 PM
Sounds like quite a photo shoot there! Your tankas are so image-rich! ~ Silhouettes and Shadows, Gershon
Rodrigues Avatar
December 16, 2020 at 4:56 PM
Thank you, Gershon :)
Dietrich Avatar
December 16, 2020 at 3:34 PM
this is a cute one to picture, Kim!
Rodrigues Avatar
December 16, 2020 at 4:56 PM
Thank you, sweet friend!
Jayasankar Avatar
December 16, 2020 at 10:15 AM
Loved this Tanka.. Great imagery Kim.. Hugs ~ Ani
Rodrigues Avatar
December 16, 2020 at 4:57 PM
Thank you, Anitha!
Babcock Avatar
December 16, 2020 at 9:36 AM
I love the image of this wonderful tanka. love phyl
Rodrigues Avatar
December 16, 2020 at 4:57 PM
Thank you, Phyl! :)
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