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Shadows

Light or shadow . Sponsor Suzette Richards posted 17/3/2025
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a young pup 
expelled by his litter mates
rejected by the mother 
huddles alone abandoned in the cold byre 
longing for comfort
an old and tired sheepdog who’s long past his prime
takes pity
offering to share his food
and a life long bond is forged 
where they find a safe haven in each other
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April 9, 2025 at 10:42 AM
Congratulations Margaret! :)
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April 11, 2025 at 5:50 PM
Thank you, Linda.
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April 9, 2025 at 2:58 AM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
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April 11, 2025 at 5:50 PM
Thank you Beata,
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April 2, 2025 at 11:02 PM
A lighthearted story where empathy prevails, I am moved.
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April 3, 2025 at 12:20 AM
Thank you Barthwell. We all need a friend. Cheers.
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