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3/12/2025 for Light or Shadows Poetry Contest sponsored by Suzette Richards

i live on Lesterford Street it's not that i didn't consider other places too bad I'm eight years old and don't know cursive i wouldn't know how to sign a rental agreement i have sixteen pennies in my piggy bank too few for a down payment and too few for McDonalds so the only choice is Cafe Lesterford where the rule is don't bite the hand that feeds you even if it the hand feeds you off a knife i will wait it out when i find myself thinking, i have to do it it is time to ask why would i want to lick dinner off knives again

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Date: 4/9/2025 10:41:00 AM
You are always thinking outside the box Dave. I love it. Makes for great reading. Congratulations! :)
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David Crandall
Date: 4/9/2025 1:11:00 PM
Hi elle! thanks for the visit, and glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 3/12/2025 10:19:00 AM
- No child should have to lick dinner off knives, David - hugs
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David Crandall
Date: 3/12/2025 12:17:00 PM
Agreed! I admit, the prompt/quote for this contest is so graphic as to be unsettling.

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