Shadowlands

One memory, found, has cradled this moment,
exquisitely composed with infinite detail.
Once lost with disease,
it is briefly retrieved,
just for this moment, before it is gone.

She smiles as she holds it,
as if it has pleased her,
a small golden flashback
to fondle awhile.

It came from the darkness,
like a small shaft of light,
on a small mote of dust
that has tumbled in flight

Poised in the sunlight
it has cradled the moment
But, then is forgotten
while it falls out of sight
back into the shadows
that cradle the night


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7/5/16
Contest: Cradling the Moment
Sponsor: Julia Ward
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Eastman Avatar
July 10, 2016 at 8:54 AM
Your poems are always exquisite and amazing... This one especially.
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 9, 2016 at 4:02 AM
Your poem was beyond moving Carrie! You described this disease so splendidly. I am faving this gem! 7 ; )
Dietrich Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 6:19 PM
Wow, amazing poem. Good to see she chose a worthy one here. Congrats.
Neumann Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 11:24 AM
I like this very much. Congratulations. I could read it like a loop with the last line becoming the first again and with the moment recurring.
La France Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 10:20 AM
Carrie, a wonderful write and a big congratulations on your win in a contest with only a few wins, 7 ~
Haight Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 9:36 AM
Your words stirred deep emotions in me, Carrie, and what a blessing to be able to cradle one last beautiful moment of life, even for a second. Congratulations on your placement on this very short list of winners. 7 Hugs, Sandra
Kimathi Avatar
July 7, 2016 at 6:21 PM
Congrats Carrie, for your top placement wuth this fine piece!! :-)
Ward Avatar
July 7, 2016 at 2:28 AM
This needs more work, but was better than the thirty under it. I didn't have many good entries this time.
Garcia Avatar
July 5, 2016 at 8:07 PM
Oh wow extremely well done. I read it actually while sitting next to my grandmother who suffers from dementia (and who I find myself struggling to maintain patience with) and it reminded me to be a bit more deliberate in how I view and treat her. Impactful. I was considering writing something for this contest but now I think I'll pass =)
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