Shadow: the True Lover

I was walking as drunk
But regret, drank nothing. 
Dogs were barking in the street
But fearless man had nothing. 

 Kicked small stones
 To entertain myself. 
 Shaped lips for whistle merrily
 To sing a song for thyself. 

Suddenly I noticed
Someone was behind me
I turned at once
But none was special behind me. 

A dark shade
Was lying silently on sand. 
Wow! It was amazing 
Something like me was printed. 

I ran hurriedly
But it chased me
I stopped
It also stopped like me. 

I said, 'go away'
Neither replied nor moved
I kicked hard it
But it not responded. 

I prayed
I bribed
I rebuked to get rid of
But it never turned.

Without any demand
It dwells with me
Nobody can understand 
How much she loves me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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De Beaulieu Avatar
March 7, 2022 at 7:28 AM
Hello Arjun, now this is true love. Enjoyed this poem. Enjoy your day my friend. Blessings. my friend.
Calasibetta Avatar
February 21, 2022 at 10:34 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest. A very interesting point of view, using shadows as ones soul. :)Paulette
Jangid Avatar
February 22, 2022 at 6:30 AM
Heartily Thanks Paulette Calasibetta. Have a lovely day.
Hutchings Avatar
February 21, 2022 at 10:07 AM
Congratulations on your win! What a thought-provoking poem! I like the mystery and intrigue. Well crafted and engaging! Much love...Meghan
Jangid Avatar
February 22, 2022 at 6:31 AM
Thanks for your goodness and support.
Romaine Avatar
February 21, 2022 at 6:52 AM
Dear Arjun; congratulations on your win in the Contest. This is a thought provoking piece from you. The ending throws a wrench in the train of thought leading up to the revelation of this one that binds you, well-done! Be Blessed, Neva
Jangid Avatar
February 21, 2022 at 7:40 AM
Thanks for your Goodness, Neva Ro maine Have a Great day dear
Horsman Avatar
February 18, 2022 at 11:09 PM
Excellent poetry, Arjun, shadows make for awesome poetry, i know, just read one.
Jangid Avatar
February 19, 2022 at 5:19 AM
Thanks Sir For your kindness and support.
Legros Kelley Avatar
February 9, 2022 at 1:25 AM
Arjun, congratulations for your win in this poetry contest, and thank you so much for sharing your amazing poem!
Jangid Avatar
February 9, 2022 at 4:53 AM
BJ Legros Kelley, thanks for your goodness and support. Have a great day dear
Ray Choudhury Avatar
January 9, 2022 at 5:30 PM
Thoughtful and intriguing poem, Arjun. Enjoyed your style. BW~ Mala
DiMino Avatar
January 9, 2022 at 5:48 AM
Yes, I agree...true love is a shadow, clinging close as our spirit of soulful being. This is excellent! Great writing. Joe.
Jangid Avatar
January 9, 2022 at 4:58 PM
Thanks for your support, Joe Di Mino Have a great day
Andresen Avatar
January 8, 2022 at 11:40 AM
- Always by your side ... lovely poem, Arjun :) - // Anne-Lise :)
Jangid Avatar
January 8, 2022 at 4:57 PM
Thanks for your goodness. Have a great day Sunshine Smile
Dietrich Avatar
January 7, 2022 at 2:58 PM
I was thinking it was a shadow all along but then it ends with it being a female. Was this written from a woman's perspective though? For me it would still have to be the shadow.
Jangid Avatar
January 7, 2022 at 4:24 PM
Good morning Andrea Dietrich. A true lover should have all these qualities like shadow. It may be woman, man and best friend too. Thanks for your goodness.
De Beaulieu Avatar
January 5, 2022 at 10:46 AM
Hello Arjun, a powerful love. A true love found. Blessings my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
January 6, 2022 at 10:48 AM
Hello Arjun, I hope all is well with yu. You are welcome my friend Arjun. Darlene
Jangid Avatar
January 5, 2022 at 10:34 PM
Thanks for your goodness, Darlene De
Pandit Avatar
January 5, 2022 at 8:40 AM
Shadow a true friend--always with us. I enjoyed your creative thoughts.
Jangid Avatar
January 5, 2022 at 10:37 PM
Thanks ????
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January 5, 2022 at 10:34 PM
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