Shadow Surprise

Daily at dusk he couldn't refute
a mystery showing up taking root
it didn't ever knock
arrived at five o'clock
shadow surprise making him hirsute



3-22-18
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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April 1, 2018 at 5:04 AM
Good one Cheryl! Never fails to shock me when I look in the mirror at the end of the day!..........pat
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April 1, 2018 at 8:39 AM
Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Pat; really appreciate it! Happy Resurrection Day!~Che :)
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March 23, 2018 at 3:01 PM
Great lim Cheryl... Have a read of Jack Ellison, he posts 5 a day :)
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March 23, 2018 at 6:43 PM
Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Silent One; glad you liked it and will try to read some of Jacks (5 a day~wow!)! ~Che :)
Gupta Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 9:52 PM
Enjoyed the Limerick ...
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March 22, 2018 at 9:59 PM
Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Probir; glad you enjoyed it!~Che :)
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