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Written on January 28, 2024

Kyrielle Sonnet

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Remembering the ages, spent with my shadow – priceless moments when I sought her, scrutinized her, emphatically stalked her because, in reality, she was clearly stalking me! ~ quote by poet ~~~ Flowing, a silhouette, dancing Under streams of delicate light In gentle whispers, entrancing Persuasive musings who excite Echoes of starry eyed wishes Glistening beneath the moonlight Sighs melt the breath as she swishes Persuasive musings who excite Glowing, figures freely strolling Gesturing to the roaring night Old followers need consoling Persuasive musings who excite Flowing, a silhouette, dancing Persuasive musings who excite

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Date: 2/19/2024 11:52:00 AM
Amazingly beautiful!! Enjoyed reading it! -Smita
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Date: 2/12/2024 11:30:00 PM
Wow! Thanks so much for sharing this, and yes, for sharing your talent. God bless you.
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Date: 2/6/2024 12:26:00 AM
This was completely mesmerizing, I truly had to read it a few times as it was crafted so beautifully. Best wishes~ C
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Date: 2/4/2024 6:47:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your post. Very nice work. Sara K
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Date: 2/2/2024 5:10:00 PM
Just lovely Gina! Your chosen picture sets off this tantalizing poem. A great example for the contest. Many thanks! :)
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Date: 1/28/2024 1:20:00 PM
Wow a beautiful example of kyrielle sonnet for us, Gina.
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Date: 1/28/2024 10:55:00 AM
Enjoyed your poem, Regina, and loved your quote!
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Date: 1/28/2024 5:31:00 AM
I love how metaphorical and symbolic 'the shadow' is. Your initial quote was powerful, and I agree. My shadow and I are soulful friends at this point. I also liked the upbeat last two lines, hugs for the day, Sara
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