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Shadow Puppets

On a halcyon stroll on a crepuscular street 
My jealousy got flowing for my hound in retreat
His visceral powers and sonorous bark
Alerted by penumbras half in the dark
On an opulent lawn, a close neighbor of mine
The desultory moon making shadow puppets with vines
I laughed at my hound in a cynical laugh
While quieting his exuberant loud aftermath
Rewarded his vigilance in spite of retrieval
Fortunately for us, he did see no evil.


    Jan 27 2016  10 word challenge : halcyon, crepuscular, jealousy
   visceral, sonorous, penumbra, opulent, desultory, cynical, exuberant
  by Daniel Turner

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Poet Destroyer A Date: 2/6/2016 11:15:00 AM Why did I earn it? ;) Login to Reply Poet Destroyer A Date: 2/6/2016 11:29:00 AM Thank you, It was about encouragement. Daniel, then I noticed you stop coming around my poems, I felt I must had done something wrong. No matter, I am still here supporting you. LINDA Daniel Turner Date: 2/6/2016 11:25:00 AM Refer to original comment. I honestly can't put it any plainer:) Your original challenge of " Who am I" in a way got the ball rolling. I don't know if you didn't think I could do it or you were just playing around. Regardless,after that the dominoes started to fall and my poetry has become more descriptive.

Poet Destroyer A Date: 2/6/2016 10:59:00 AM Hi Daniel, thank you for the love reply Login to Reply Daniel Turner Date: 2/6/2016 11:07:00 AM You earned it!

Poet Destroyer A Date: 2/6/2016 9:38:00 AM Daniel, Congratulations on your "see no evil, hear no evil, speak no evil" ten-word challenge WIN!" Love LINDA Login to Reply Daniel Turner Date: 2/6/2016 9:45:00 AM Thank you, Linda. I am humbly honored surrounded by so much talent. Your never ending support is a beacon for this lost ship. Your time, visits, and kind comments are highly valued.

Skat A Date: 2/2/2016 10:45:00 PM Daniel, Congrats on your ten-word challenge WIN. ** SKAT ** Login to Reply Daniel Turner Date: 2/2/2016 11:34:00 PM Thank you,SKAT. I'm going to miss your smiling flowery face and smiles:(

Susan Gentry Date: 2/2/2016 6:37:00 PM :) Very clever way to use the ten words! I love it. Congratulations on your win. Login to Reply Daniel Turner Date: 2/2/2016 6:40:00 PM Thank you, Susan. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment.

Lin Lane Date: 2/2/2016 10:56:00 AM I loved your idea for this contest, Daniel. You did a great job on that walk..haha. Thanks for rewarding your pup for protecting you. Login to Reply Daniel Turner Date: 2/2/2016 12:37:00 PM Thank you, Lin. It can be very difficult to come up with original ideas but then again I'm sure you already know that. I prefer light humor. Thanks for stopping by and your kind supportive remarks.

James Inman Date: 2/2/2016 9:36:00 AM Lol, Daniel. Enjoyed your write. Login to Reply Daniel Turner Date: 2/2/2016 9:37:00 AM Thank you very much, James. It was a lot of fun.

Sarita Milliner Date: 2/2/2016 8:20:00 AM Another great creation!! Login to Reply Daniel Turner Date: 2/2/2016 8:23:00 AM Thank you again. It was fun.

Balveen Cheema Date: 2/1/2016 7:13:00 PM I quite liked it! Congrats Daniel! Login to Reply Daniel Turner Date: 2/1/2016 7:20:00 PM I am glad you approve, but it is I who should be patting your back for a job well done.

Sandra Haight Date: 2/1/2016 5:53:00 PM Nicely done, Daniel, in using these difficult words. Congratulations on your win. Sandra Login to Reply Daniel Turner Date: 2/1/2016 7:18:00 PM Thank you, my dear, but it is I who should be congratulating you. I still have so much to learn.

Beautiful Scars Date: 2/1/2016 5:10:00 PM Daniel, congrats on your placement in the contest *smiles* -luloo Login to Reply Daniel Turner Date: 2/1/2016 5:29:00 PM Thank you, Luloo, I just now found out it was over. Right back at you, You placed higher than me. So kudos to you.

Pandita Sietesantos Date: 1/31/2016 6:51:00 PM Daniel, I love your take on the theme and the creative way in which you applied the 10 words! It's a 7 from me and I am sure SO will love it! Pandita Login to Reply Daniel Turner Date: 1/31/2016 6:58:00 PM I'm not sure they're looking for levity, but I try to see the happy side of life. There's already enough bad stuff out there. Thank you for your kind words

Judy Konos Date: 1/28/2016 9:25:00 AM I'm glad you stopped by leaving a comment ...as I am enjoying your poetry very much....so thanks.... ... Login to Reply Daniel Turner Date: 1/28/2016 9:36:00 AM Thank you for your gracious kind words.