Daniel Turner Poet Rhyme

Shadow Puppets

On a halcyon stroll on a crepuscular street 
My jealousy got flowing for my hound in retreat
His visceral powers and sonorous bark
Alerted by penumbras half in the dark
On an opulent lawn, a close neighbor of mine
The desultory moon making shadow puppets with vines
I laughed at my hound in a cynical laugh
While quieting his exuberant loud aftermath
Rewarded his vigilance in spite of retrieval
Fortunately for us, he did see no evil.


    Jan 27 2016  10 word challenge : halcyon, crepuscular, jealousy
   visceral, sonorous, penumbra, opulent, desultory, cynical, exuberant
  by Daniel Turner

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Poet Destroyer A February 6, 2016 at 11:15 AM Why did I earn it? ;) Poet Destroyer A February 6, 2016 at 11:29 AM Thank you, It was about encouragement. Daniel, then I noticed you stop coming around my poems, I felt I must had done something wrong. No matter, I am still here supporting you. LINDA Daniel Turner February 6, 2016 at 11:25 AM Refer to original comment. I honestly can't put it any plainer:) Your original challenge of " Who am I" in a way got the ball rolling. I don't know if you didn't think I could do it or you were just playing around. Regardless,after that the dominoes started to fall and my poetry has become more descriptive.

Poet Destroyer A February 6, 2016 at 10:59 AM Hi Daniel, thank you for the love reply Daniel Turner February 6, 2016 at 11:07 AM You earned it!

Poet Destroyer A February 6, 2016 at 9:38 AM Daniel, Congratulations on your "see no evil, hear no evil, speak no evil" ten-word challenge WIN!" Love LINDA Daniel Turner February 6, 2016 at 9:45 AM Thank you, Linda. I am humbly honored surrounded by so much talent. Your never ending support is a beacon for this lost ship. Your time, visits, and kind comments are highly valued.

Skat A February 2, 2016 at 10:45 PM Daniel, Congrats on your ten-word challenge WIN. ** SKAT ** Daniel Turner February 2, 2016 at 11:34 PM Thank you,SKAT. I'm going to miss your smiling flowery face and smiles:(

Susan Gentry February 2, 2016 at 6:37 PM :) Very clever way to use the ten words! I love it. Congratulations on your win. Daniel Turner February 2, 2016 at 6:40 PM Thank you, Susan. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment.

Lin Lane February 2, 2016 at 10:56 AM I loved your idea for this contest, Daniel. You did a great job on that walk..haha. Thanks for rewarding your pup for protecting you. Daniel Turner February 2, 2016 at 12:37 PM Thank you, Lin. It can be very difficult to come up with original ideas but then again I'm sure you already know that. I prefer light humor. Thanks for stopping by and your kind supportive remarks.

James Inman February 2, 2016 at 9:36 AM Lol, Daniel. Enjoyed your write. Daniel Turner February 2, 2016 at 9:37 AM Thank you very much, James. It was a lot of fun.

Sarita Milliner February 2, 2016 at 8:20 AM Another great creation!! Daniel Turner February 2, 2016 at 8:23 AM Thank you again. It was fun.

Balveen Cheema February 1, 2016 at 7:13 PM I quite liked it! Congrats Daniel! Daniel Turner February 1, 2016 at 7:20 PM I am glad you approve, but it is I who should be patting your back for a job well done.

Sandra Haight February 1, 2016 at 5:53 PM Nicely done, Daniel, in using these difficult words. Congratulations on your win. Sandra Daniel Turner February 1, 2016 at 7:18 PM Thank you, my dear, but it is I who should be congratulating you. I still have so much to learn.

Beautiful Scars February 1, 2016 at 5:10 PM Daniel, congrats on your placement in the contest *smiles* -luloo Daniel Turner February 1, 2016 at 5:29 PM Thank you, Luloo, I just now found out it was over. Right back at you, You placed higher than me. So kudos to you.

Pandita Sietesantos January 31, 2016 at 6:51 PM Daniel, I love your take on the theme and the creative way in which you applied the 10 words! It's a 7 from me and I am sure SO will love it! Pandita Daniel Turner January 31, 2016 at 6:58 PM I'm not sure they're looking for levity, but I try to see the happy side of life. There's already enough bad stuff out there. Thank you for your kind words

Judy Konos January 28, 2016 at 9:25 AM I'm glad you stopped by leaving a comment ...as I am enjoying your poetry very much....so thanks.... ... Daniel Turner January 28, 2016 at 9:36 AM Thank you for your gracious kind words.