Shadow of the Past

Shadow of the past
Goes on my walks

Merging in crowds
Holding its ground

Changing my shape
Sporting with light

Hiding in dark
A deceitful pause

Haunting me again
On the path of my dawn

May 5, 2018
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George Avatar
March 31, 2022 at 6:34 AM
Some memories like trailing shadows will always follow us ! Never give much thought to them. At times we have to deliberately chide them away ! Resonant with human life in general.....
Callus Avatar
December 23, 2018 at 2:34 AM
I feel a relation between my past and yours, Vijay. In the shadows of my mind many memories lie dormant, but ready to come into action at any moment. Regards // paul
Raven Avatar
November 9, 2018 at 4:19 AM
Hi Vijay, those shadows Of the Past can haunt us over and over. How true these wonderful words are my friend. We learn from these shadows. An excellent piece my friend. Your words hold poetic power. Have a wonderful Friday. your friend always....Mike.
Williams Avatar
May 9, 2018 at 7:12 AM
Those shadows tend to hang around don't they? Best to leave them and walk on sometimes. A great write Vijay, as always....Maria :)
Pandit Avatar
May 9, 2018 at 7:46 AM
Always delighted by your visit and comments..many thanks Maria.
Onclaud Avatar
May 6, 2018 at 7:03 PM
to befriend our inner dragons is letting go... such a fine message and piece, vijay.. huggs
Pandit Avatar
May 9, 2018 at 7:45 AM
Thank you nette.
Swartz Avatar
May 6, 2018 at 10:14 AM
Haunting paths and shadows are how we find the light. Great truth in your words Vijay!
Pandit Avatar
May 6, 2018 at 1:25 PM
Thank you James.
Canerdy Avatar
May 6, 2018 at 7:28 AM
So concise--but says so much about that stalker named The Past! Janice
Pandit Avatar
May 6, 2018 at 1:26 PM
Thank you Janice.
Trifiatis Avatar
May 6, 2018 at 5:26 AM
Aesthetic, profound and inspiring my friend, Vijay!
Pandit Avatar
May 6, 2018 at 7:02 AM
Thank you Demetrios.
May Avatar
May 5, 2018 at 9:30 PM
Nicely penned Vijay...
Pandit Avatar
May 6, 2018 at 7:01 AM
Thank you Joseph.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 5, 2018 at 8:52 PM
The past does indeed haunt us striking when least expected!
Pandit Avatar
May 6, 2018 at 7:01 AM
Thank you Kim.
Dietrich Avatar
May 5, 2018 at 7:58 PM
oh that last part was outstanding. Haunting me again on the path of my dawn. It just WON'T go away!!
Pandit Avatar
May 6, 2018 at 7:01 AM
Thank you Andrea.
Michael Avatar
May 5, 2018 at 7:16 PM
I don't think it plans to leave...so you'll know what to do...I like the concept and the way you expressed it...All the best Vijay
Pandit Avatar
May 6, 2018 at 7:01 AM
Thank you Arturo.
Allison Avatar
May 5, 2018 at 6:08 PM
I guess there are some memories that will always linger like a dark shadow Vijay:-( hugs jan xx
Pandit Avatar
May 6, 2018 at 7:01 AM
Thank you Jan.
Sands Avatar
May 5, 2018 at 5:12 PM
Oh , it reminds me of certain memories from the past that carry on and do not ever leave. Well written Vijay. :)
Pandit Avatar
May 6, 2018 at 7:00 AM
Thank you Heidi.
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