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Shadow Dance

sky melts in blue lake trees shadow dance on ripples… leaves sail on rustle
April 21, 2020 Syllable count : 5/7/5 Checked on howmanysyllables.com Contest : Let The Pens Flow - Haiku Sponsor : Jenish Somadas

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Date: 4/26/2020 1:43:00 PM
I love this sublimal! Very visual and sensual. Congrats
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Date: 4/26/2020 1:13:00 PM
Wonderful imagery.. Great win Subimal..
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Date: 4/21/2020 1:15:00 PM
Such a beautiful and serene picture painted by your words in your haiku Sublimal. Love your opening line - so evocative - really sets the tone.
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