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Shadow Child

This woman walks around In the shadow of a child And she scrambles to hold on To the oats no longer wild There were once so many dreams Ran a time or two in clover She got caught up in the dance 'Til the memories took over Now the child that follows her Is relentless in her pain And she needs to be wrapped up Rocked to sleep time and again So this woman walks the world Hoping for a saving grace Listening for those little footsteps Looking for that tender face And her heart aches to remember What her mind no longer does That the grief she calls her shadow Is the child that she once was By Deb Wilson...Originally written March19,2010 Written for the contest Why Oh Why? Sponsored by Constance~A Rambling Poet

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Date: 4/24/2013 7:53:00 PM
A very nice poem, in the best poem contest... Congratulations, Deb . Have yourself a lovely evening @~>- Linda <3
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Date: 4/24/2013 1:04:00 PM
Congrats on your win~ A.O
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Date: 10/19/2010 5:14:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in my contest...Sara
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Date: 10/10/2010 1:31:00 PM
Congratulations on getting a win with this one. I love how this was all pulled togther at the end. I thought you finished your poem brilliantly.
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Date: 10/9/2010 2:13:00 PM
beautiful poem , love it, congrats on your win in the contest
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Date: 10/9/2010 7:05:00 AM
Many congratulations Deb on your win in Constance's contest 'Why oh Why' have a lovely weekend >> James
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Date: 10/8/2010 10:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Deb. Love,Carol
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Date: 10/8/2010 9:23:00 AM
Deb congratulations on your win in the contest ;) Wilma
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Date: 10/8/2010 5:22:00 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Deb
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Date: 10/8/2010 3:57:00 AM
Congratulatons, Deb on you placement in my contest, Why Oh Why~~
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Date: 10/7/2010 11:48:00 PM
Congrats Deb on your win in Constance's contest with this extra special entry.. enjoy another victorious moment this happy weekend with luv..
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Date: 10/7/2010 10:41:00 PM
Congratulations on your fantastic win in the contest, Deb...Love, Audrey
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Date: 4/2/2010 10:52:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this poem. Many of us miss the innocent child we once were. Well done Debra.
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Date: 4/2/2010 9:54:00 AM
This is a beautiful poem you have written there. Nicely done. I'm going to add it in my favourite
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Date: 3/29/2010 3:47:00 PM
"Her heart aches to remember what her mind no longer does." Yes! You nailed it with just those two lines. I REALLY like this poem. Congrats on the selection. Love, daver
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Date: 3/29/2010 5:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Debra. May you have many more features and a wonderful week filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/20/2010 2:36:00 PM
BEAUTIFUL POEM, WELCOME TO POETRY SOUP---WISH YOU MUCH INSPIRATION AND SUCCESS HERE AMONG FRIENDS.
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Date: 3/20/2010 7:22:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Debra. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/19/2010 8:53:00 PM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets.. please continue to share your creative writes with us all.. as this delight tonight.. luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup..
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