Shadow Child

This woman walks around 
In the shadow of a child
And she scrambles to hold on
To the oats no longer wild
There were once so many dreams
Ran a time or two in clover
She got caught up in the dance
'Til the memories took over
Now the child that follows her
Is relentless in her pain
And she needs to be wrapped up
Rocked to sleep time and again
So this woman walks the world
Hoping for a saving grace
Listening for those little footsteps
Looking for that tender face
And her heart aches to remember
What her mind no longer does
That the grief she calls her shadow
Is the child that she once was


By Deb Wilson...Originally written March19,2010

Written for the contest Why Oh Why?
Sponsored by Constance~A Rambling Poet
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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April 24, 2013 at 7:53 PM
A very nice poem, in the best poem contest... Congratulations, Deb . Have yourself a lovely evening @~>- Linda <3
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April 24, 2013 at 1:04 PM
Congrats on your win~ A.O
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October 19, 2010 at 5:14 PM
Congratulations on your win in my contest...Sara
Augustus Avatar
October 10, 2010 at 1:31 PM
Congratulations on getting a win with this one. I love how this was all pulled togther at the end. I thought you finished your poem brilliantly.
Roberts Avatar
October 9, 2010 at 2:13 PM
beautiful poem , love it, congrats on your win in the contest
Fraser Avatar
October 9, 2010 at 7:05 AM
Many congratulations Deb on your win in Constance's contest 'Why oh Why' have a lovely weekend >> James
Brown Avatar
October 8, 2010 at 10:37 AM
Congratulations on your win Deb. Love,Carol
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October 8, 2010 at 9:23 AM
Deb congratulations on your win in the contest ;) Wilma
Mehta Avatar
October 8, 2010 at 5:22 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Deb
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October 8, 2010 at 3:57 AM
Congratulatons, Deb on you placement in my contest, Why Oh Why~~
Sweetheart Avatar
October 7, 2010 at 11:48 PM
Congrats Deb on your win in Constance's contest with this extra special entry.. enjoy another victorious moment this happy weekend with luv..
Haick Avatar
October 7, 2010 at 10:41 PM
Congratulations on your fantastic win in the contest, Deb...Love, Audrey
Dominick Avatar
April 2, 2010 at 10:52 AM
I enjoyed reading this poem. Many of us miss the innocent child we once were. Well done Debra.
Madeleine Avatar
April 2, 2010 at 9:54 AM
This is a beautiful poem you have written there. Nicely done. I'm going to add it in my favourite
Austin Avatar
March 29, 2010 at 3:47 PM
"Her heart aches to remember what her mind no longer does." Yes! You nailed it with just those two lines. I REALLY like this poem. Congrats on the selection. Love, daver
Brown Avatar
March 29, 2010 at 5:16 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Debra. May you have many more features and a wonderful week filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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March 20, 2010 at 2:36 PM
BEAUTIFUL POEM, WELCOME TO POETRY SOUP---WISH YOU MUCH INSPIRATION AND SUCCESS HERE AMONG FRIENDS.
Brown Avatar
March 20, 2010 at 7:22 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Debra. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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March 19, 2010 at 8:53 PM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets.. please continue to share your creative writes with us all.. as this delight tonight.. luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup..
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