Premiere Contest WinnerShadow

My name is Shadow, 
Daughter of the Night and Sorrow, 
Heir of the Kingdom of the Unknown, 
A mystery that lays deep in my every bone. 

My name is Shadow, 
And I love daylight, when I’m not invisible to you, 
When I can be by your side, in a life so hollow, 
Cause you are my every color, but without you I’m only blue. 

So please sleep with your light on, 
Let me be an everlasting existence in your world, 
You won’t be afraid of me like others, right? 
When I’m the only darkness present in the light. 

I hope you will see me for who I really am, one cursed for eternity, 
Who longs to be a lover, not a watcher of cruelty, 
And I just ask you to acknowledge me from time to time, 
‘Cause only your eyes can bring the stars to make me, daughter of the Night, shine. 

Or will you just be like everyone else, 
People who see me for the monster that I was born, 
Not valiant enough to break the pattern of my mess, 
And too scared to touch me for being a rose full of thorns.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Kendrick Avatar
April 1, 2026 at 4:13 PM
Ana, this one is very emotive and expressive work. I hope it is not about you being abused or maybe the other way around. Thanks for sharing it with us. Sara K
Solomon Avatar
April 2, 2026 at 1:07 PM
Hello, Sara! Thank you for this, and I am well:). This poem is about being so utterly in love with someone that it makes them so perfect in my eyes, but also makes me aware of my many flaw and hope that despite it, they could love me at least just a bit.
Ashley Avatar
March 8, 2026 at 8:27 AM
Dear Ana, your poem is as intriguing as it is beautiful. Your use of imagery captivates my heart and imagination. I especially loved this poetic moment "You won’t be afraid of me like others, right?/ When I’m the only darkness present in the light." Fantastic! Congratulations for your golden trophy win in Seth's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Solomon Avatar
March 8, 2026 at 3:43 PM
I appreciate your words so much. I always love when my verses resonate with other!
Pina Avatar
February 25, 2026 at 1:42 AM
Congrats on your win in my contest, I really enjoyed "too scared to touch me for being a rose full of thorns." Hope all is well, - Seth
Solomon Avatar
February 25, 2026 at 10:17 AM
Thank you so much! I am very grateful for the win :)
Peranteau Avatar
October 26, 2025 at 7:42 AM
welcome ') monster? hm....let me learn yuh...again; welcome....much love
Solomon Avatar
November 3, 2025 at 1:27 AM
Thank you very much!
Bordner Avatar
October 4, 2025 at 12:09 PM
Your metaphysics are lovely...your poetry sensual honesty...This poem is a Masterpiece Ana, and another FAV!!!...J.A.B.
Solomon Avatar
October 5, 2025 at 1:49 AM
Thank you so much! Is my favorite also:)
Agustin Avatar
September 29, 2025 at 5:31 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Solomon Avatar
September 29, 2025 at 8:40 AM
Thank you!
Seeker Avatar
September 26, 2025 at 8:15 PM
If the unreal be real and dream be truth of the waking state …
Solomon Avatar
September 27, 2025 at 6:01 AM
beautiful
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