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Shadow

As I grow older
I see my shadow changing
into my father’s

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Silent One

February 25, 2024 at 11:11 AM

IS that a good or bad thing? I have tried all my life not to be like my father... thought provoking senryu...

Jerry Brotherton

February 25, 2024 at 6:16 PM

I always said i would never be an old fuddy duddy. That I would always be the cool dad...but life has its own plans, I guess. I think it's a good thing.

Karen Jones

February 25, 2024 at 1:38 AM

So true for many! Enjoyed

Jerry Brotherton

February 25, 2024 at 6:08 PM

Even when they don't believe it.

Bill Baker

February 24, 2024 at 9:16 PM

This sure is true in my case. I like your Senryu, my friend. Write On! Bill

Jerry Brotherton

February 25, 2024 at 6:07 PM

Thanks Bill. I remember when i was a teenager, I could have swore that I was adopted. It seemed like I was so different. But age has definitely proven that theory wrong.