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and in my dream- I find myself in a lush forest dripping wet with life, steamy and sultry I am one with nature and with the aqua drifting water oh, the soft moss and the wet lime ferns I float in tranquility and beneath me water reeds grow, swaying so many hues of greens and colors dwelling in harmony juniper, sage, olive, blue, pine emerald green of a little frog and dark brown of a crocodile small yellow little fish kiss my toes a lovely fushia flower, an orange snake slithers a fluttering purple butterfly, a blue bird sings sweetly green twining vines, meandering in the dark foliage my sage eyes, whisper come fall into the lush depths with me I will take you to a world full of utter peace where all beautiful shades of nature, mingle and entwine _____________________________ May 18, 2016 Poetry/Free Verse/"shades of nature" Copyright Protected, ID 16-792-122-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. For the contest, The Sun Is Out sponsor, CT Second Place

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Date: 6/20/2016 6:18:00 PM
You always have such creative descriptive words that turn your poems into pictures
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Date: 6/15/2016 5:59:00 AM
Great.
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Date: 6/12/2016 12:05:00 PM
i could listen to your lovely voice for hours, my friend. you really should make a recording of all your poems. hope you are all having a great Sunday x
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Date: 6/11/2016 9:09:00 AM
Lovely, Broken Wings. Congratulations on your podium placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 6/11/2016 6:58:00 AM
A splendid win, Constance:) Congratuations:)
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Date: 6/11/2016 6:43:00 AM
MAGNIFICENT CONSTANCE....congrats
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Date: 6/11/2016 6:40:00 AM
Absolutely lovely,Broken!Congratulations!
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Date: 6/11/2016 3:22:00 AM
I just adore this one, Constance. BIG congrats with a big win!
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Date: 6/11/2016 12:20:00 AM
Broken, Thank you for entering my contest 'CT
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Date: 5/24/2016 10:33:00 PM
Very beautiful poem and a very beautiful voice. Perfect recitation.
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Date: 5/21/2016 4:46:00 PM
This is FANTASTIC, Constance. Hands down, a winner!!! I love how your voice falls deep in some of the lines. This was the perfect recitation of the perfect nature poem. FAVE (I feel so sad that I don't even know what MP3 MEANS)
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Constance La France
Date: 5/21/2016 7:16:00 PM
Andrea, thanks for reading and listening to my poem, and for the fantastic, I like that word.. let me know when you are ready to give it a whirl, I will help you ~
Date: 5/21/2016 2:36:00 PM
So happy you figured it out, Broken Wings! Your poem, along with your voice and the way you read it, were all so lovely. 7 Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 5/21/2016 7:13:00 PM
Sandra, thanks so much for visiting and reading and listening to my poem, and for the lovely and 7 ~
Date: 5/21/2016 1:07:00 PM
Broken Wings, Ruben is right this is just exceptional. Your voice really places the true emotional meaning to your poem that you wanted. Awesome girl <3 Eve
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Constance La France
Date: 5/21/2016 7:13:00 PM
Eve, thanks for visiting and for the exceptional and awesome ~
Date: 5/20/2016 11:40:00 AM
you color my world, constance with this splendid and beautiful artpiece!.. follow the sun!...huggs
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Date: 5/21/2016 7:11:00 PM
nette, thanks for the lovely comment ~
Date: 5/20/2016 10:27:00 AM
Hi BW, You have penned a sad well written piece with amazing imagery.Best of luck in the contest. Excellent 7 - Alexis
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Date: 5/21/2016 7:10:00 PM
Alexis, thanks for the compliment, the excellent and the 7 !
Date: 5/20/2016 2:55:00 AM
I agree with James. Splendid imagery:)
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Date: 5/21/2016 7:09:00 PM
Jo, oh there it is again, that lovely word splendid, thanks~
Date: 5/19/2016 11:02:00 PM
You need ask but once BW. I'm there. Splendid imagery.
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Date: 5/21/2016 7:08:00 PM
James, you are the best, thanks for the splendid, I love that word ~
Date: 5/19/2016 8:03:00 PM
I walked this dream with your words B.W. and loved every bit. thanks for the surreal journey, your friend, Lewis x
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Date: 5/21/2016 7:08:00 PM
Lewis, thanks for the lovely comment, appreciate ~
Date: 5/19/2016 6:32:00 PM
So beautiful!
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Constance La France
Date: 5/21/2016 7:07:00 PM
Kim, thanks so much for the beautiful ~

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