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''shades of Nature''


and in my dream- I find myself in a lush forest
dripping wet with life, steamy and sultry
I am one with nature and with the aqua drifting water
oh, the soft moss and the wet lime ferns
I float in tranquility and beneath me water reeds grow, swaying
so many hues of greens and colors dwelling in harmony
juniper, sage, olive, blue, pine
emerald green of a little frog and dark brown of a crocodile
small yellow little fish kiss my toes
  a lovely fushia flower, an orange snake slithers
    a fluttering purple butterfly, a blue bird sings sweetly
      green twining vines, meandering in the dark foliage
        my sage eyes, whisper come fall into the lush depths with me
I will take you to a world full of utter peace
where all beautiful shades of nature, mingle and entwine

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May 18, 2016 


Poetry/Free Verse/"shades of nature"
Copyright Protected, ID 16-792-122-0
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.

For the contest, The Sun Is Out
sponsor, CT

Second Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Rebstock Avatar
June 20, 2016 at 6:18 PM
You always have such creative descriptive words that turn your poems into pictures
Neumann Avatar
June 15, 2016 at 5:59 AM
Great.
Horne Avatar
June 12, 2016 at 12:05 PM
i could listen to your lovely voice for hours, my friend. you really should make a recording of all your poems. hope you are all having a great Sunday x
Haight Avatar
June 11, 2016 at 9:09 AM
Lovely, Broken Wings. Congratulations on your podium placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
Daniel Avatar
June 11, 2016 at 6:58 AM
A splendid win, Constance:) Congratuations:)
Lawless Avatar
June 11, 2016 at 6:43 AM
MAGNIFICENT CONSTANCE....congrats
Chansarkar Avatar
June 11, 2016 at 6:40 AM
Absolutely lovely,Broken!Congratulations!
Dietrich Avatar
June 11, 2016 at 3:22 AM
I just adore this one, Constance. BIG congrats with a big win!
T  Avatar
June 11, 2016 at 12:20 AM
Broken, Thank you for entering my contest 'CT
Salehi Avatar
May 24, 2016 at 10:33 PM
Very beautiful poem and a very beautiful voice. Perfect recitation.
Dietrich Avatar
May 21, 2016 at 4:46 PM
This is FANTASTIC, Constance. Hands down, a winner!!! I love how your voice falls deep in some of the lines. This was the perfect recitation of the perfect nature poem. FAVE (I feel so sad that I don't even know what MP3 MEANS)
La France Avatar
May 21, 2016 at 7:16 PM
Andrea, thanks for reading and listening to my poem, and for the fantastic, I like that word.. let me know when you are ready to give it a whirl, I will help you ~
Ward Avatar
May 21, 2016 at 2:57 PM
Imagery is fab, and you read your work beautifully.
La France Avatar
May 21, 2016 at 7:14 PM
Julia, thanks so much for the nice comment, appreciate ~
Haight Avatar
May 21, 2016 at 2:36 PM
So happy you figured it out, Broken Wings! Your poem, along with your voice and the way you read it, were all so lovely. 7 Hugs, Sandra
La France Avatar
May 21, 2016 at 7:13 PM
Sandra, thanks so much for visiting and reading and listening to my poem, and for the lovely and 7 ~
Roper Avatar
May 21, 2016 at 1:07 PM
Broken Wings, Ruben is right this is just exceptional. Your voice really places the true emotional meaning to your poem that you wanted. Awesome girl <3 Eve
La France Avatar
May 21, 2016 at 7:13 PM
Eve, thanks for visiting and for the exceptional and awesome ~
Onclaud Avatar
May 20, 2016 at 11:40 AM
you color my world, constance with this splendid and beautiful artpiece!.. follow the sun!...huggs
La France Avatar
May 21, 2016 at 7:11 PM
nette, thanks for the lovely comment ~
Y. Avatar
May 20, 2016 at 10:27 AM
Hi BW, You have penned a sad well written piece with amazing imagery.Best of luck in the contest. Excellent 7 - Alexis
La France Avatar
May 21, 2016 at 7:10 PM
Alexis, thanks for the compliment, the excellent and the 7 !
Daniel Avatar
May 20, 2016 at 2:55 AM
I agree with James. Splendid imagery:)
La France Avatar
May 21, 2016 at 7:09 PM
Jo, oh there it is again, that lovely word splendid, thanks~
Inman Avatar
May 19, 2016 at 11:02 PM
You need ask but once BW. I'm there. Splendid imagery.
La France Avatar
May 21, 2016 at 7:08 PM
James, you are the best, thanks for the splendid, I love that word ~
Raynes Avatar
May 19, 2016 at 8:03 PM
I walked this dream with your words B.W. and loved every bit. thanks for the surreal journey, your friend, Lewis x
La France Avatar
May 21, 2016 at 7:08 PM
Lewis, thanks for the lovely comment, appreciate ~
Rodrigues Avatar
May 19, 2016 at 6:32 PM
So beautiful!
La France Avatar
May 21, 2016 at 7:07 PM
Kim, thanks so much for the beautiful ~
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