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Shades of Green

I find myself in a lush forest
dripping wet with steamy sultry life, and
I am one with nature and with the green drifting water . . . 
oh, the soft moss and the wet lime ferns caress me
and I float in tranquility where beneath me reeds are swaying
in the many hues of green
like juniper, sage, olive and pine . . . 
see the emerald of a little frog-   the brown of a crocodile
the yellow little fish that kiss my toes
  that lovely red flower-  careful of the orange snake slithering
     a fluttering purple butterfly-   a blue bird singing sweetly
       and twining vines meandering in the dripping foliage . . . 
         my sage eyes whisper-   come fall into the lush with me
I will take you to a world of utter peace
where all shades of green mingle and entwine
               but beware, for I am not of this world anymore . . . 

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May 18, 2016


Poetry/Free Verse/shades of green
Copyright Protected, ID 16-1109-228-0
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.


Submitted to the Contest, Ultimate Jan. 2019 Standard
sponsor, Brian Strand

First Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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May Avatar
January 30, 2019 at 7:26 AM
Wow, you truly brought this to life using colors creating a imagery in my mind and your words flow so well my friend.
La France Avatar
January 30, 2019 at 6:27 PM
Bobby, thanks for visiting and for the compliment ~
Horne Avatar
January 29, 2019 at 3:28 PM
love this - had to read it twice
La France Avatar
January 30, 2019 at 6:28 PM
Jack, when I love a poem, I read it over, hope that is the reason, thanks for visiting ~
Horsman Avatar
January 29, 2019 at 3:09 PM
Oh this is so superbly intense, A wonderful poem, love it..Harry
La France Avatar
January 30, 2019 at 6:28 PM
Harry, thanks for visiting and for the compliment ~
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