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I find myself in a lush forest dripping wet with steamy sultry life, and I am one with nature and with the green drifting water . . . oh, the soft moss and the wet lime ferns caress me and I float in tranquility where beneath me reeds are swaying in the many hues of green like juniper, sage, olive and pine . . . see the emerald of a little frog- the brown of a crocodile the yellow little fish that kiss my toes that lovely red flower- careful of the orange snake slithering a fluttering purple butterfly- a blue bird singing sweetly and twining vines meandering in the dripping foliage . . . my sage eyes whisper- come fall into the lush with me I will take you to a world of utter peace where all shades of green mingle and entwine but beware, for I am not of this world anymore . . . _____________________________ May 18, 2016 Poetry/Free Verse/shades of green Copyright Protected, ID 16-1109-228-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Submitted to the Contest, Ultimate Jan. 2019 Standard sponsor, Brian Strand First Place

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Date: 1/30/2019 7:26:00 AM
Wow, you truly brought this to life using colors creating a imagery in my mind and your words flow so well my friend.
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Constance La France
Date: 1/30/2019 6:27:00 PM
Bobby, thanks for visiting and for the compliment ~
Date: 1/29/2019 3:28:00 PM
love this - had to read it twice
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Constance La France
Date: 1/30/2019 6:28:00 PM
Jack, when I love a poem, I read it over, hope that is the reason, thanks for visiting ~
Date: 1/29/2019 3:09:00 PM
Oh this is so superbly intense, A wonderful poem, love it..Harry
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Date: 1/30/2019 6:28:00 PM
Harry, thanks for visiting and for the compliment ~

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