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Shades of Gold

glowing shades of gold sunrise over mountain crests ~ nimbus disruption August 17, 2020 Haiku - Nature Themed 2 Poetry Contest Sponsor: Tania Kitchin

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Date: 1/15/2021 11:44:00 PM
I believe you are more of a morning person than I'll ever be, Jenna. Thank you for describing the beauty I miss almost every day! Delightful lines, congrats on your win ~ John
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Jenna Logan
Date: 1/15/2021 11:50:00 PM
Good morning, John. My sleeping habits are atrocious. I'm sorry you miss out on seeing this beautiful scene. Thank you for your ever present kind thoughts.
Date: 1/15/2021 11:32:00 AM
- I am sending a copy of my comment from 8/23/2020 5:06:00 AM :) - Congratulations on your 2nd win, Jenna :) - Happy weekend ang hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/15/2021 11:48:00 PM
That's such a sweet thing to do, Anne-Lise...Thank you so much!
Date: 8/26/2020 9:55:00 AM
Have to love it? Pangie
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Date: 9/6/2020 4:08:00 AM
Have to or want to... Thanks, Pangie.
Date: 8/23/2020 5:06:00 AM
- Beautiful haiku, Jenna :) - Congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/6/2020 4:07:00 AM
Thank you so much, Anne-Lise.
Date: 8/22/2020 8:28:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Jenna, great imagery. Hugs Eve
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Date: 9/6/2020 4:07:00 AM
Thank you very much, Eve.
Date: 8/22/2020 4:37:00 PM
'Nimbus disruption' - o m J, how grand is that!!! ( I may steal those two words in the distant future so nobody gets that I stole them from you) Beaut stuff, Congratulations.
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Date: 9/6/2020 4:06:00 AM
Thank you for liking them enough to 'borrow' and of course you may, Sigrid.
Date: 8/22/2020 4:26:00 PM
Dropping back to say many congrats on your win Jenna:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/6/2020 4:05:00 AM
Thanks for the return visit and congrats, Jan.
Date: 8/22/2020 1:29:00 PM
Yes, this one really stirred me from before. Congrats. I enjoyed seeing this again.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/6/2020 4:04:00 AM
Thanks a lot, Andrea.
Date: 8/22/2020 12:35:00 PM
Jenna, congratulations on your winning placement with your vivid haiku!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/6/2020 4:04:00 AM
Thank you for the honor, Tania. I appreciate it very much.
Date: 8/22/2020 12:02:00 PM
I don't often think of gold having shades. Wonderful, creative picture, Jenna. Having lived in the mountains, I am very familiar with those "nimbus disruptions!" Nice turn. Congratulations on your winning placement.
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Date: 9/6/2020 4:04:00 AM
Thank you so very much, Sam.
Date: 8/21/2020 5:47:00 PM
This is great Jenna. I find it beautiful and realistic. The weather can change so abruptly in the mountains. I really enjoyed it!
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Date: 8/22/2020 8:59:00 AM
Then your kudos are as good as a higher place contest finish. Thanks so much for your kind thoughts, Linda.
Date: 8/21/2020 10:22:00 AM
I love to see gold in nature, usually it comes in connection to sunrise and sunset. Great ending in this one. You have a real gift with haiku. GL in the contest, Jenna.
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Date: 8/22/2020 8:59:00 AM
Thanks so much, John. I'm pleased that you liked it. It was only a 4th place finish.
Date: 8/20/2020 4:13:00 PM
VERY nice. Love that twist!
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Date: 8/21/2020 6:22:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea.
Date: 8/19/2020 7:49:00 AM
Great one Jenna! Good job and good luck in the contest
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/21/2020 6:21:00 AM
Thanks on both remarks, Mark.
Date: 8/18/2020 11:53:00 PM
Your poem is a photographer’s dream! One of the most astounding moments in Nature! Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 8/21/2020 6:21:00 AM
Thank you so much, Krish.
Date: 8/17/2020 11:47:00 PM
You have packed a lot of descriptiveness in just three lines.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/18/2020 1:22:00 AM
Hi Robert, Thanks so much for reading and leaving your thoughts.
Date: 8/17/2020 4:56:00 AM
Trust the rain to spoil that beautiful scene you've created Jenna Good luck Tom
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Date: 8/17/2020 3:53:00 PM
lol Tom. So true. Thank you for all of your support.
Date: 8/17/2020 4:53:00 AM
Beautiful :) Love it. God bless you
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/17/2020 3:52:00 PM
Thank you so much, Gina.
Date: 8/17/2020 4:26:00 AM
Such vivid imagery Jenna, i especially love the final line:-) hugs jan xx
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/17/2020 3:52:00 PM
Hi Jan, and thanks so much!

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