Shades

the order of the iambic pentameter,
the chaos of the totally unmetrical,
the logical conception of a piece by Bach,
the frenzied wailing of the latter John Coltrane,
the predictability of the sonnet form,
the convoluted voices of free verse,
the yin the yang, the shade the sheen,
and all the vibrant shades that lie between!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Gass Avatar
January 14, 2009 at 12:23 PM
I love this Keith. In fact, this poem was part of the inspiration for the new one I just posted! Thank you! You are an inspiration to many and i know I look up to your wonderful talent. Love and hugs, Robin
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January 13, 2009 at 8:53 PM
I think it's the Artist's role to define how he wants to balance these two very powerful forces. Even Coltrane had to play melodies every now and then. Even Bach wrote near chaotic fugues like the one in D Minor. I like commenting on your work Kieth:)
Babcock Avatar
January 11, 2009 at 2:02 PM
A brilliant piece Keith. God Bless Phyl
Winter Avatar
January 11, 2009 at 5:31 AM
Love the title and you covered it all so well with your excellent writing. Interesting piece! Love it. Love, Shar
Reynolds Avatar
January 11, 2009 at 3:48 AM
Woohoo, all hail the mighty poet! Awesome, i love them all! brillaint and very creative,Love, K
Gorelick Avatar
January 10, 2009 at 5:45 PM
Keith, you've got a winner her..but then, yours always are. BG
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January 10, 2009 at 3:00 PM
Interesting approach to the topic of writing. I really like the last line. Fitting title. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us and for your kind comments on my poem. Good luck with all your writing endeavors. Karen
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January 10, 2009 at 10:45 AM
kooool one great! I like it!....Maryam
Shokry Avatar
January 10, 2009 at 10:36 AM
cool man , I guess you are a well-cultured poet , allow me to fav you.
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