Shaddows

Auspicious shadows of traddtion loomed overhead                                                                          And rushed into the corners of the room
As daylight slipped away                                                                                                                 The moon
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Duncan Avatar
February 26, 2017 at 8:21 PM
Great write :)
Deschler Avatar
August 12, 2013 at 2:49 PM
Great poem, Michael! I enjoyed it! I love all things dark. I am a gothic at heart, as well! I have many poems that you might enjoy, I just haven't gotten to post them, yet. I think you will probably become one of my favorite poets on Poetry Soup!
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April 29, 2013 at 2:06 AM
Clever format and lay-out. Well written
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April 26, 2013 at 9:44 AM
wow... I love the feeling and imagery, it all becomes one.... This is lovely Michael,,,, I like these 2 words. ... Auspicious shadows ... many images in that alone. always~ Linda
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