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Shackled By Hate

He stands out in a horde shackled by deep hate, wizened, yet venom in full store elicits a man’s devilish state.   His mordacious act make’s heart chill when  trifle things that least matter provoke's him to discharge a cartridge to nil a Life that loiter's in a pub gets the batter. 29-Mar-2017 Note: This poem is about a hate crime, where a middle aged kills an young man in a public place. Contest: Eight word challenge Sponsored by: John Hamilton MUST USE THE FOLLOWING WORDS 1. CARTRIDGE 2. ELICIT 3. MORDACIOUS 4. HORDE 5. SHACKLED 6. TRIFLE  7.  WIZENED 8. LOITER

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Date: 4/9/2017 1:42:00 PM
Really good use of the 8 words, nice entry, congrats on a fine placement!
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Sathya Babu
Date: 4/9/2017 9:23:00 PM
Thanks a Lot John, I enjoyed participating in your contest. Regards, Sathya

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