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Shackled and Alone

How silent lies a lone ghost ship that lists, tethered to its mooring having run aground inside a dying dream, now distant. Written on 3/28/2018

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Date: 7/17/2019 6:36:00 PM
I can see her silent on the ground. Nicely deserved win.
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Date: 7/17/2019 12:53:00 PM
Ooh so intriguing, mysterious and somehow sad. Well done Laura, great little find hidden amongst your poetry catalogue!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 7/17/2019 2:01:00 PM
Thank you, Nina! So glad you liked this! It’s based off my interpretation of an abstract painting that seemed sad and haunting to me...
Date: 7/17/2019 11:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your deserving first plz win Laura. Loved this stanza. xxoo
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Laura Leiser
Date: 7/17/2019 1:59:00 PM
Thank you, Connie! :)
Date: 7/17/2019 10:02:00 AM
Laura, back to say congrats on your win for this wonderful piece. John
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Laura Leiser
Date: 7/17/2019 11:03:00 AM
Thanks, John! :)
Date: 7/17/2019 9:44:00 AM
This is excellent Laura, congrats on a fine win!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 7/17/2019 11:15:00 AM
Thanks, John!
Date: 6/25/2019 12:49:00 PM
"run aground inside a dying dream" sometimes life is this way. Nicely penned, Laura, I must go back and read the original poem. All the best. John
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Laura Leiser
Date: 6/25/2019 1:15:00 PM
Thank you, John! Glad you liked this one! :)
Date: 6/24/2019 9:38:00 PM
I can't say it any better than nette did below. Well-crafted! :) gw
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Laura Leiser
Date: 6/25/2019 12:29:00 AM
Thank you, Gershon! :)
Date: 6/24/2019 9:37:00 PM
laura, that's a sharp image so well crafted...wow and huggs
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Laura Leiser
Date: 6/25/2019 12:29:00 AM
Thank you,,Nette! :)