Sexyku

secret rendezvous
strewn cork screw and swimwear
sunrise visions blush


02/20/2017

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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

November 6, 2019 at 7:31 AM

Now that's a Sexy Ku. ~x

Jan Allison

November 5, 2019 at 2:23 PM

had to drop by and read this again after seeing your comment to Mo !!:-) hugs Jan xx

Lisa Ricci

March 12, 2017 at 7:23 AM

Good Morning Tim. This must be some new format with the incorporation of romance. I have seen a few floating around. Yes, you have met the contest requirement. The form is in true count voice and tone not to mention theme. Well done entirely. Best of luck with the contest and your entry.

Scott Thirtyseven

March 6, 2017 at 7:46 AM

the title is a winner, the words tingle my senses.

Maurice Yvonne

February 22, 2017 at 5:22 PM

Ooh, la-la. Just what sex should be a few words and a lot of action.

Andrea Dietrich

February 21, 2017 at 3:38 PM

you really painted the scene, Tim. Good one!

Chris Green

February 21, 2017 at 11:25 AM

Sounds like the perfect situation to me...strewn swimsuits, corkscrews, it doesn't get much better than that.

Arthur Vaso

February 20, 2017 at 5:51 PM

Sexy!

Seren Roberts

February 20, 2017 at 5:50 PM

great Tim....Seren

Lynn Marie

February 20, 2017 at 4:21 PM

...one of the best haiku's ever tim! :-) sensational! blessings, lynn

Ilene Bauer

February 20, 2017 at 4:20 PM

ha! i love the name of the poem the best...

Sara Ella

February 20, 2017 at 2:46 PM

Oh! What a view! ;) It's a lovely Haiku <3

Nette Onclaud

February 20, 2017 at 12:58 PM

S for sultry, tim... so sizzling!..huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen

February 20, 2017 at 12:21 PM

- ..... sweet blush, Tim :) - Love it <3 - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

February 20, 2017 at 11:53 AM

ooh err very sultry Tim:-) hugs Jan xx

Darren White

February 20, 2017 at 11:37 AM

OOOhhh those sunrise visions! They hide behind the clouds quickly. That cork is screwed too. Love this Tim :D

Carol B.

February 20, 2017 at 11:10 AM

Yup I would say this is a sexy haiku for sure! Great job Tim :)

Kim Merryman

February 20, 2017 at 10:31 AM

Excellent imagery, Tim! This creates a vivid picture. Blessings, Kim

Charmaine Chircop

February 20, 2017 at 9:54 AM

Oh the blush and the secret rendevous.makes me think someone was being naughty...Did it say swimwear and corkscrew...Oh drinking wine too and on the beach...Ha :)Awesome Haiku.Tim.