Sexyku

secret rendezvous strewn cork screw and swimwear sunrise visions blush 02/20/2017

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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 11/6/2019 7:31:00 AM

Now that's a Sexy Ku. ~x

Jan Allison

Date: 11/5/2019 2:23:00 PM

had to drop by and read this again after seeing your comment to Mo !!:-) hugs Jan xx

Lisa Ricci

Date: 3/12/2017 7:23:00 AM

Good Morning Tim. This must be some new format with the incorporation of romance. I have seen a few floating around. Yes, you have met the contest requirement. The form is in true count voice and tone not to mention theme. Well done entirely. Best of luck with the contest and your entry.

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 3/6/2017 7:46:00 AM

the title is a winner, the words tingle my senses.

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 2/22/2017 5:22:00 PM

Ooh, la-la. Just what sex should be a few words and a lot of action.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/21/2017 3:38:00 PM

you really painted the scene, Tim. Good one!

Chris Green

Date: 2/21/2017 11:25:00 AM

Sounds like the perfect situation to me...strewn swimsuits, corkscrews, it doesn't get much better than that.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 2/20/2017 5:51:00 PM

Sexy!

Seren Roberts

Date: 2/20/2017 5:50:00 PM

great Tim....Seren

Lynn Marie

Date: 2/20/2017 4:21:00 PM

...one of the best haiku's ever tim! :-) sensational! blessings, lynn

Ilene Bauer

Date: 2/20/2017 4:20:00 PM

ha! i love the name of the poem the best...

Sara Ella

Date: 2/20/2017 2:46:00 PM

Oh! What a view! ;) It's a lovely Haiku <3

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/20/2017 12:58:00 PM

S for sultry, tim... so sizzling!..huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/20/2017 12:21:00 PM

- ..... sweet blush, Tim :) - Love it <3 - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 2/20/2017 11:53:00 AM

ooh err very sultry Tim:-) hugs Jan xx

Darren White

Date: 2/20/2017 11:37:00 AM

OOOhhh those sunrise visions! They hide behind the clouds quickly. That cork is screwed too. Love this Tim :D

Carol B.

Date: 2/20/2017 11:10:00 AM

Yup I would say this is a sexy haiku for sure! Great job Tim :)

Kim Merryman

Date: 2/20/2017 10:31:00 AM

Excellent imagery, Tim! This creates a vivid picture. Blessings, Kim

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 2/20/2017 9:54:00 AM

Oh the blush and the secret rendevous.makes me think someone was being naughty...Did it say swimwear and corkscrew...Oh drinking wine too and on the beach...Ha :)Awesome Haiku.Tim.

Daniel Turner

Date: 2/20/2017 9:41:00 AM

That's not blushing, that's called afterglow:)