Sexyku -1

Sexyku - #1

titillating rain
awakens dormant lovers
moistened buds open


2/19/2017

submitted to – Sexyku – Poetry Contest

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Paul Callus

February 24, 2017 at 1:39 PM

Sensual and worthy of its high placement, John! Congratulations! Regards // paul

Eve Roper

February 23, 2017 at 11:21 PM

Va-va-voom!!! :-O Wow very good :) a 7 and congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve

Alexis Y.

February 23, 2017 at 7:28 PM

Congratulations on your win:-) Alexis

Joseph May

February 23, 2017 at 7:01 PM

Great write..Congrats on your win

Andrea Dietrich

February 23, 2017 at 5:48 PM

ooh la la!!! I had the same thought as Caycay. VERY well done, JOhn and big congrats to you on the well deserved win.

CayCay Godwin

February 23, 2017 at 12:31 PM

ew la la and congratulations, subtle-delivered a definitive impact! I'm impressed. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

John Hamilton

February 23, 2017 at 9:40 AM

Great write-Great win!

Richard Lamoureux

February 23, 2017 at 9:02 AM

A tremendous piece. Congrats on your win in my contest John.

Charlotte Puddifoot

February 22, 2017 at 7:28 AM

sensual words - the last line is particularly lovely...thanks for your comment on my work

Nette Onclaud

February 20, 2017 at 1:18 PM

it's getting hot in here, john... yes, sexy, ohhh.. huggs

Jan Allison

February 20, 2017 at 6:58 AM

Very sensual John I think Richard will like this one a lot:-) hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith

February 19, 2017 at 11:51 PM

Enchanting John

Charlie Smith

February 19, 2017 at 10:45 PM

"Smut patrol alert" buds is a baned word.

Charlie Smith

February 23, 2017 at 10:53 AM

It's a joke for God's sake...

Charlie Smith

February 20, 2017 at 11:23 PM

Trying to be funny...

Kim Rodrigues

February 19, 2017 at 9:25 PM

Cute!

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