Sexy Feeling

Maude flogged Chip Zien with a hide-tipped cane.
He, ahh-yeah , ooo-ahh, oh with a strain.
Maude turned the script page and flipped;
Dang, boy, please stick to the script.
Ignore the script write and whip me again

5/15/2023
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Baker Avatar
May 20, 2023 at 1:16 PM
This has to do well, Eve, it's very funny and a fun read. Bill
Dietrich Avatar
May 18, 2023 at 4:02 PM
Haha. Now that is good and funny
Proxenos Avatar
May 18, 2023 at 12:26 PM
Had a good laugh with this one my friend, Great bawdy poem and humorous - Good luck in tHe competition. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Nicole Avatar
May 17, 2023 at 7:16 PM
It seems Chip Zien likes being whipped, and all Maude wants for him to do, is stick to the script. Your thoughts bring a smile, Eve. Good luck in the contest, my dear friend. :) Hugs, Brandy
Kendrick Avatar
May 16, 2023 at 3:22 PM
I think it will get a laugh. Good contest entry. Thank you for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
Buhagiar Avatar
May 16, 2023 at 1:43 AM
Perfect limerick. Best for a win. Hugs.
Flood Avatar
May 15, 2023 at 4:51 PM
Ooh… perhaps I could join the queue… Funny give liner, Eve. Good luck in the contest. Terry
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