Kevin Leake Poet Senryu

Sexy Blow Up Doll

Sexy Blow up Doll
                                 One kiss and she blew away
                                    Went up with a whoosh





                                        © Copyright KC.Leake
                                              29th April 2015
                                           All Rights Reserved

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Julia Ward September 22, 2015 at 3:23 AM It's good, but you need to call it a senryu, as it is not serious. Julia, with my best wishes. Kevin Leake September 22, 2015 at 10:59 AM Thanks Julia, Will look into that, damn I thought I had it right too!!! Thanks for the read and comment Best Wishes Kevin

Skat A September 11, 2015 at 8:11 AM Lol, must it been a light on the knees ... Skat Kevin Leake September 11, 2015 at 11:55 AM Glad you saw the funny side of this Skat, Thanks for the read and comment. Kevin