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Sexy Blow Up Doll

Sexy Blow up Doll One kiss and she blew away Went up with a whoosh © Copyright KC.Leake 29th April 2015 All Rights Reserved

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Date: 9/22/2015 3:23:00 AM
It's good, but you need to call it a senryu, as it is not serious. Julia, with my best wishes.
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kevin leake
Date: 9/22/2015 10:59:00 AM
Thanks Julia, Will look into that, damn I thought I had it right too!!! Thanks for the read and comment Best Wishes Kevin
Date: 9/11/2015 8:11:00 AM
Lol, must it been a light on the knees ... Skat
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Date: 9/11/2015 11:55:00 AM
Glad you saw the funny side of this Skat, Thanks for the read and comment. Kevin