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Sexxy Back

Tight,
your sexxy back,
slim, 
hypnotized by such delicate decor. 
Your rippled core,
a six pack of lust.
I'm high on you, 
like I'm trippin' on angel dust.
your sexxy back so visually robust
I must adjust myself before I bust.


Jared Pickett
04/27/2010
Asavvy1

passionfree verse

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Anne-Lise Andresen

February 2, 2012 at 6:18 AM

Thank you for sharing yours poem. - oxox Anne-Lise

May 7, 2010 at 8:33 PM

Mr. Pickett, I have read your poems and find them very stimulating. You have a very rare tallent. I love reading your works. Scarlett

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

May 4, 2010 at 6:38 PM

SOUP MAIL...

Doris Culverhouse

May 3, 2010 at 6:29 AM

Funny comments from Deborah, enjoyed the poem too. On the Sestina--you mention sticking to the meter, but I don't see a specific requirement on meter listed. does it have to have a certain number of syllables?

Mario Vitale

April 30, 2010 at 4:18 PM

Very good/ I would never down grade your work like you had mine/ Thanks, Mario

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

April 28, 2010 at 3:42 PM

OK now u have me hooked on the Sestina form so I wrote another entitled A Dance to Romance (A Romeo Meets His Juliet) .. a critique' would be welcome ... oh ASavvy 1.. luv.. "Sweetheart"

Debbie Guzzi

April 28, 2010 at 10:14 AM

LOL / Full hard and so rotund, your abdomen protrudes, the bulk of you so large ...your gift it does preclude, I'd be high on you oh yes, high so high on that barrel of a chest, I see you laugh like Santa Claus, though why none can guess, perhaps you do look better when it's dark and I'm undressed! :P

Michael J. Falotico

April 28, 2010 at 6:17 AM

I need a shower lol well written my friend

Andrea Dietrich

April 27, 2010 at 10:50 PM

Sexy poem, Jared!! Luv, andrea

Marty Owens

April 27, 2010 at 9:05 PM

Very passionate and sensual...enjoyed...Thanks for the honor of winning in your contest...Marty

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

April 27, 2010 at 8:39 PM

I aim to please ASavvy 1 and so far all my numbers are in the WIN column.. no losses.. thankxxx for the encouragement.... luv your unique creative write Mr. J... Sexxy Back is a favorite song of mine... hhmmmmmm .. guess great minds DO think alike... later luv.. "Sweetheart"