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Sexxy Back

Tight, your sexxy back, slim, hypnotized by such delicate decor. Your rippled core, a six pack of lust. I'm high on you, like I'm trippin' on angel dust. your sexxy back so visually robust I must adjust myself before I bust. Jared Pickett 04/27/2010 Asavvy1

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/2/2012 6:18:00 AM

Thank you for sharing yours poem. - oxox Anne-Lise

Date: 5/7/2010 8:33:00 PM

Mr. Pickett, I have read your poems and find them very stimulating. You have a very rare tallent. I love reading your works. Scarlett

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/4/2010 6:38:00 PM

SOUP MAIL...

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 5/3/2010 6:29:00 AM

Funny comments from Deborah, enjoyed the poem too. On the Sestina--you mention sticking to the meter, but I don't see a specific requirement on meter listed. does it have to have a certain number of syllables?

Mario Vitale

Date: 4/30/2010 4:18:00 PM

Very good/ I would never down grade your work like you had mine/ Thanks, Mario

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/28/2010 3:42:00 PM

OK now u have me hooked on the Sestina form so I wrote another entitled A Dance to Romance (A Romeo Meets His Juliet) .. a critique' would be welcome ... oh ASavvy 1.. luv.. "Sweetheart"

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 4/28/2010 10:14:00 AM

LOL / Full hard and so rotund, your abdomen protrudes, the bulk of you so large ...your gift it does preclude, I'd be high on you oh yes, high so high on that barrel of a chest, I see you laugh like Santa Claus, though why none can guess, perhaps you do look better when it's dark and I'm undressed! :P

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 4/28/2010 6:17:00 AM

I need a shower lol well written my friend

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/27/2010 10:50:00 PM

Sexy poem, Jared!! Luv, andrea

Marty Owens

Date: 4/27/2010 9:05:00 PM

Very passionate and sensual...enjoyed...Thanks for the honor of winning in your contest...Marty

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/27/2010 8:39:00 PM

I aim to please ASavvy 1 and so far all my numbers are in the WIN column.. no losses.. thankxxx for the encouragement.... luv your unique creative write Mr. J... Sexxy Back is a favorite song of mine... hhmmmmmm .. guess great minds DO think alike... later luv.. "Sweetheart"

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/27/2010 6:40:00 PM

Passionate and very sensual,lovely to read indeed-Charma.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/27/2010 4:55:00 PM

Passionate..Thanks for the placement in your contest..Sara