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Sex In a Parking Lot

demure pink panties
orange in the glow of the streetlights
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from a petite
cinnamon colored ankle
the bronze back of ghetto lust
flexes and glistens
above the writhing form of sensuality incarnate

battle of the sexes

the incubus versus the succubus
in a seventy-four chevy

write your name on the window
has you pass by

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/18/2009 8:20:00 PM
Hot!!! An exciting moment intertwined in the back seat of a classic! Great piece
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Date: 4/18/2009 7:06:00 PM
Steamy write and great imagery.
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Date: 4/18/2009 7:00:00 PM
Vivid.. I have been dangling before... awesome write Hugs, Robin
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Date: 4/18/2009 9:18:00 AM
Very tantalizing poem, Brian! The image is so erotic and described so vividly that the reader can see it clearly. Love the reference to writing "your name on the window." Steamy windows are a sign of heated passion inside the '74 Chevy. Love it! Carolyn
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Date: 4/18/2009 7:49:00 AM
very creative my friend and sexy imagery. Nothing like the thrill of outdoor lust..... ANIMALS!! lol.
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Date: 4/18/2009 6:49:00 AM
I saw the title of this and I knew it was yours, before I saw your name. Amazing again!
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Date: 4/18/2009 6:26:00 AM
I'm too wasted to even write my name. This stirred the old bones unto exhaustion. SCORCH! Love, daver
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Date: 4/18/2009 5:46:00 AM
Are you freaking kidding me brother? how amazing is this read? you have took this to another level with your brillance.. the last line is a knockout....terrific write.
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