Several Miles From Home In Ireland

Mountains in the Ocean above which stood
     A piercing Sky of blue and Clouds
     Remarked upon to honest vessel
     By arrant birds aloft on high.

     Turn sails to home too far to see
     A boat of fish caught by sea breeze
     As countrymen pause and drain their Ales
     On the earth, on the Ocean; dim-lighted and pale.

     A Castle in the Clouds without any owner
     No servant, no master and entirely empty
     Where none would go but a single guest
     In its other realm on the Hawk's winged path.

     Stumble from Pub into unwelcomed street.
     The black of the Sky and its cold on his cheek.
     An angry, strong cry as he heads from this town,
     Into Highlands and Castles and lost Ocean sounds.


     (Note: accent on the "e" in third stanza's "winged".)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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May 14, 2014 at 12:38 PM
Erik, such a wonderful poem.... i love this poem... Castle in the sky... deep imagery... XOX~ Linda
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