Franco Gonza Poet Verse

Sevenbits--Nature

Thunder growls beneath  fired sky
Crackling its way down  street wires
As booms pound on our ceiling.

Forceful winds roughen wheezed  noise
In a pitch quite deafening
While we  huddle together;

Enjoying silent movies.



SEVENBITS Contest hosted by nette onclaud
10.02.2017

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Darlene De Beaulieu October 24, 2017 at 4:54 PM Oh....how clever! I like this poem. Have a nice evening my friend.

Andrea Dietrich October 8, 2017 at 8:32 PM Wow, you really set the scene . I can really imagine this in the storm. Congrats on first place.

Gregory Richard Barden October 8, 2017 at 3:15 AM Franco - sincere congratulations on your well-earned win, my friend, and blessings for more such recognition of your wonderful writing talents! Keep up the great work!

Subimal Sinha-Roy October 8, 2017 at 2:09 AM Congratulations on your great win, Franco.

Susan Ashley October 7, 2017 at 8:49 PM Congratulations Franco on your excellent win with this fantastic write!

Eve Roper October 7, 2017 at 8:01 PM Congratulations on your win, Franco, fabulous write.. Hugs Eve ~`*

Alexis Y. October 7, 2017 at 5:01 PM Hi Franco, Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis

Constance La France October 7, 2017 at 4:40 PM Franco, CONGRATULATIONS on your placement with this wonderful poem!

Nette Onclaud October 7, 2017 at 3:40 PM ohh, i didn't see that twist coming, and ' silent' movies at that... big cheers for garnering a top win, franco, and thanks for participating... huggs

Adeniji Toluwalope Gideon October 2, 2017 at 3:00 PM What a nice craft! Franco. Best wishes in the contest.