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it is dawn in the city and all is quiet and hushed today, I wrote seven words . . . the streets are windswept still a lonely soul- I wander painted pigeons follow me my page of words swirls away _______________________ May 14, 2020 Poetry/Seven Words Swirling Copyright Protected, ID 20-1252-172-03 All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France Written for the contest, Finish Line In Seven sponsor, nette onclaud, Theme chosen - #1 City Life First Place Poem of the Day, May 16, 2020

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Jc Hawkens

Date: 5/27/2020 9:04:00 PM

I came back to say congrats on this wonderful poem. I just love it.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/20/2020 10:49:00 AM

You’re a winner and have POTD ! Congratulations!

Aditi Mishra

Date: 5/19/2020 11:16:00 PM

Coming back to congratulate you on your top placement Constance :)

John Watt

Date: 5/18/2020 9:16:00 PM

A wistful painting of day's first light. Well done, Constance. Congrats on your POTD!

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 5/18/2020 2:35:00 PM

Hello Dear Heart, a poem can be shot or longer. As long it is a poem. Have a nice day my friend.

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 5/17/2020 12:19:00 PM

Now, a big congratulations on your POtD with this fine piece of writing.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/16/2020 5:53:00 PM

We have never known such quiet. Congratulations on having this lovely expressive poem honored with POTD Constance. It is very deserving! Blessings xxoo

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 5/16/2020 4:03:00 PM

Beautiful, poignant and captivating imagery, Constance...congrats to you! xx Rhonda

Joe Maverick

Date: 5/16/2020 3:47:00 PM

Enjoyed this Constance, Its good to see it was Chosen for potd.'

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/16/2020 2:36:00 PM

- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Constance :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/16/2020 2:06:00 PM

Congratulations on your potd win. Seven words can say a ton and you did. Enjoy your day and win..............

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 5/16/2020 12:59:00 PM

Your imaginative, and creative poem was absolutely destined to be POTD - Congratulations Constance. Hugs, Jennifer

Brandy Nicole

Date: 5/16/2020 12:50:00 PM

Words will always tangle and then take shape, dance along the page. May images continue to follow you, so we can watch you bring them to life. Congratulations Constance, on Poem of the Day. : ) Brandy

Arturo Michael

Date: 5/16/2020 10:30:00 AM

Very good...Congratulation Dear Heart on POTD...a creative piece indeed

Mark Koplin

Date: 5/16/2020 10:20:00 AM

The pigeon is highly unappreciated. They rule the cities and countryside as well. Congratulations on potd!

Jc Hawkens

Date: 5/16/2020 8:50:00 AM

Beautiful Poem, A fav for me. Love the imagery in your poem. It drew me into the scene you depicted—best of luck in the contest and Congratulations on your POTD.

Winged Warrior

Date: 5/16/2020 8:44:00 AM

Great entry for contest my dear friend...and Congrats!! on POTD!!...hopefully they don't paint you lol...best wishes from the Wingster :o)

Frederic Parker

Date: 5/16/2020 8:27:00 AM

I like this and the image it creates

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 5/16/2020 8:22:00 AM

lonely and beautiful writing. best of luck in the contest.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 5/16/2020 6:48:00 AM

You do so much in so little words my friend!

John Lawless

Date: 5/16/2020 6:43:00 AM

Ah, Constance, the pigeon - black sheep of the dove family.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/16/2020 6:39:00 AM

So well said in seven words--congrats Constance on poem of the day.

Jan Allison

Date: 5/16/2020 6:22:00 AM

what a wonderful interpretation of the city life theme, i love the painted pigeon line it is so descriptive, many congrats on POTD:-) hugs Jan xx

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 5/16/2020 5:06:00 AM

Oh wow. I love this to bits. Beautiful penning Constance! Congratulations on POTD! My house is littered with canvases of Bank St rooftops lined with pigeons. I remember clear as day the big gorgeous showy white homer escapee doing his courtship dance, joining the flock; and looking for who might be his offspring for years after. A FAVE. <3 xomo!

Tania Kitchin

Date: 5/16/2020 5:04:00 AM

Constance, congratulations on POTD with your lovely whimsical poem!