Evelyn Judy Buehler Poet Tanka

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Seven Up

Gold dawn came early
Seven bluebirds on rouge skies
rising up in song
Discovery awaited
on lavender streets up high

Cool breezes were caught
on a 7am flight
Green trees fell away
Sunup had soon turned orange
in the season of the sun

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Paula Goldsmith July 4, 2022 at 12:50 PM A beautiful write/picture. Love It. Have a great/blessed day................ Evelyn Judy Buehler July 4, 2022 at 2:00 PM That is so nice to know. Thank you. Best wishes, Evelyn

Joseph P. DiMino June 23, 2022 at 5:21 PM Lovely moment in time captured, Evelyn. Birds are always a fascination, their seeming majesty over the sky. Excellent write! Evelyn Judy Buehler June 23, 2022 at 5:49 PM Thank you so much, Joe. I'm so glad that you enjoyed this moment in time. :)

Darlene De Beaulieu June 23, 2022 at 3:56 PM Hello Evelyn Buehlr, I like this poem . It will be my fav. Enjoy your evening my friend. Hugs. Darlene De Beaulieu June 24, 2022 at 5:03 AM Hello Evelyn, you are very welcome. Hugs. Evelyn Judy Buehler June 23, 2022 at 5:47 PM Thank you for the dual honor of your kind words and your fav, Darlene. Hope your evening is wonderful, too. Hugs.

Kim Rodrigues June 23, 2022 at 9:53 AM Love the title and descriptive ascent! Evelyn Judy Buehler June 23, 2022 at 5:44 PM Thank you for your smile inducing comment, Kim. :)

Victor Buhagiar June 23, 2022 at 1:57 AM Always so beautifully described, Evelyn. Evelyn Judy Buehler June 23, 2022 at 9:07 AM Your comments always delight. Thank you. :)

Harry Horsman June 23, 2022 at 1:30 AM Oh i do do so love the visual aspect of your poetry. Evelyn Evelyn Judy Buehler June 23, 2022 at 9:05 AM Thank you very much, Harry. :)