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I must think fast. My house is on fire and I'll have 16 minutes at the most to decide what I will save! For sure, I will rescue the computer, or the flash drive at the very least.That is number one, for this represents a great number of hours I have spent creating poetry. The second thing is my photos. I've saved most of them in albums, and there are many! I'll have to grab them up in armfuls and make two trips back and forth to get them out! Third, I really should not forget paper documents: proof of birth and house ownership, certificates, checks, etc. To get those things redone is a huge hassle, and luckily, I have them all in one big box. What next? I think I will grab up my jewelry, especially my rings with precious stones that I love so much. Bracelets, earrings and necklaces too. I'll toss them all into one big bag and worry about sorting them later! I've used up at least ten minutes of my time by now. Next I will try to rescue my clothes. There are too many of them to save them all, but I will grab up my favorites, yanking them from hangers and taking them to my lawn in big piles. I'll use the hamper to carry them in! After clothing comes shoes! Of my many pairs, I need only to save a few which are my very favorites and my two most comfortable pairs which I wear the most often. Finally, I have arrived at the final thing! Most of the sixteen minutes to get stuff out of my house has disappeared by now, so I will run into my kitchen and grab up my supplements along with any healthy nutrition bars and dark chocolate, all kept in my pantry. I will just shove them all into a large box and get my butt out of the house. Whew!! The fire truck is here now. I am praying all my favorite nic nacs, books and old records will somehow be preserved! I can always get new sheets, blankets, furniture and televisions, but the things I most cherish are the things I grabbed first to take out of the house, especially those things irreplaceable such as photographs and my poetry! And what did I learn from this little exercise? Well, I really need to have all my favorite things previously organized into big boxes which are easy to carry! Feb.21, 2019 for Caren Krutsinger's Seven Things You Would Save If Your House Was on Fire

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Date: 2/28/2019 12:11:00 AM
Bravo, Andrea. The lessons learned was the sure takeaway from this. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 2/28/2019 12:11:00 AM
Bravo, Andrea. The lessons learned was the sure takeaway from this. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 2/27/2019 11:55:00 AM
You is organized, lady! ;))) Excellent write! Congratulations on you win! xomo
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Date: 2/27/2019 11:31:00 AM
You made it! Onto the winning list as well Andrea. Congratulations.
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Date: 2/27/2019 12:33:00 AM
Hi Andrea, Well done and congratulations on your placing in this contest. Poetry hugs my friend, Love Jennifer.
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Date: 2/23/2019 11:25:00 AM
wise. beautifully described
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Date: 2/22/2019 10:40:00 PM
Hi Andrea, You have penned a great entry for contest. It was a well thought out on what to save. You took the reader with you as you rushed to save your precious things. It looks like a winner to me. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
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Date: 2/21/2019 5:25:00 PM
Lucky, you had luxury of time..you rescued almost everything dear to you. The thought of facing a fire is quite frightening. Best for a win, Andrea.
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Date: 2/21/2019 4:47:00 PM
Wow that was some dash around the house, I've got three smoke alarms so hopefully that will give me more time. Makes me want to install a sprinkler system then maybe not as everything would be soaked lol. Good luck. Tom.
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Date: 2/21/2019 4:34:00 PM
I am glad this is fiction. Almost had a fire in my place a while back. I sold another article recently. You have won some money prizes for poetry? I won ten baseball cards in a poetry contest. I await the beginning of the season. I know they are overpaid but I like it Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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