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Seven Senses

See 
 the beauty 
 of the earth,
 starting with birth.

 Hear
 the roar
 of thunders voice,
 a child rejoice.

 Touch
 creation,
 water and sand,
 a loved one’s hand.

 Smell
 the wind
 and salty seas,
 honey from bees.

 Taste
 fresh fruits
 and apple crisp,
 loves sweet kiss.

 Feel 
 your neighbours 
 from the start,
 with open heart.
 

 Sense 
 others feelings
 before you begin,
 so all can win.

 11.28.2014
 Contest: Didactic 
2nd

Copyright © Brenda Meier-Hans | Year Posted 2014

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Paul Callus Date: 12/9/2014 11:44:00 AM ...and back with merited congratulations, Brenda!! Login to Reply

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 12/9/2014 8:59:00 AM And back wid huge congrats on ur superb write n a super win! Login to Reply

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Date: 12/8/2014 9:34:00 PM Congrats, Brenda, on a wonderful win with these great words of wisdom! Yes, if we were all more sensitive to others, the world would be a kinder place!! Hugs, Rhonda Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 12/8/2014 8:24:00 PM Nicely done poem, congrats on the win Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 12/8/2014 5:18:00 PM Lovely write Brenda....congrats n your win Login to Reply

Kayod5 Kayode Date: 12/8/2014 2:37:00 PM The Oracle has spoken,the crown is won;congrats on the win Brenda...huggs Login to Reply Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 12/8/2014 4:22:00 PM Thank you Kayod5

Maurice Yvonne Date: 12/8/2014 11:08:00 AM Congratulations on your win. Login to Reply

Maurice Yvonne Date: 12/8/2014 11:06:00 AM Very creative attack to this challenge! Login to Reply Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 12/8/2014 4:19:00 PM Thanks Maurice.

Carrie Richards Date: 12/8/2014 10:16:00 AM The simplicity of such truths, is what moves me the most !! Lovely poem, Brenda !! Login to Reply Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 12/8/2014 4:18:00 PM Thank you Carrie.

Regina Mcintosh Date: 12/8/2014 9:45:00 AM I enjoyed your poem. Thank you for entering and May God bless you with love and prayers, Gina Login to Reply Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 12/8/2014 4:15:00 PM Thanks so much Regina.

Sandra Haight Date: 12/8/2014 9:37:00 AM Hi Brenda, I enjoyed your lovely poem about our wonderful senses and how we can use them to appreciate life. Congratulations on your win! Hugs, 7+Fav, Sandra Login to Reply Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 12/8/2014 4:15:00 PM Thank you so much Sandra

Jan Allison Date: 12/8/2014 7:54:00 AM dropping back with my congrats Brenda:-) hugs jan xx Login to Reply Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 12/8/2014 4:14:00 PM Thank you Jan.

Rob Carmack Date: 12/8/2014 2:34:00 AM Great placement for a great poem. Congrats. Login to Reply Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 12/8/2014 4:13:00 PM Thanks Rob.

Sara Kendrick Date: 12/4/2014 5:29:00 AM Very good use of the human's senses..God is good to bless us with all of these isn't he..Reads like a winner to me..Way to go.Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara Login to Reply Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 12/4/2014 7:24:00 AM Thank you so much Sara

Jan Allison Date: 11/29/2014 4:27:00 PM you touched all the sense here Brenda - outstanding write good luck:-) hugs jan xxx Login to Reply Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 11/29/2014 7:04:00 PM Thank you Jan. My trusty friend.

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 11/29/2014 2:02:00 PM A very valuable lesson here loaded with deep knowledge that springs from a loving hear and a mind full of appreciation for life, dear Brenda! A seven , a must! Login to Reply Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 11/29/2014 7:04:00 PM Thank you so very much Demetrios

David Meade Date: 11/29/2014 10:45:00 AM I used all of my senses and feelings . . . it is awesome! a fav for me! Login to Reply Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 11/29/2014 7:03:00 PM Thank you so much David.

Paul Callus Date: 11/29/2014 7:50:00 AM I enjoyed your words of wisdom, Brenda! I am sure you have an excellent 6th sense, too! // paul Login to Reply Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 11/29/2014 7:02:00 PM Yes Paul, My uncle I wrote about in my poem Forever Loved, taught us the last two senses very well. Thanks for your kind comment.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 11/29/2014 7:43:00 AM Outstanding work Brenda ! Gl in contest! Login to Reply Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 11/29/2014 6:57:00 PM Thanks Dr. Sharma

Shadow Hamilton Date: 11/29/2014 4:34:00 AM superb Brenda you bring the seven senses to life gl in contest I hope this does well hugs 7 Login to Reply Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 11/29/2014 6:57:00 PM Thank you Shadow.