Brenda Meier-Hans Poet Didactic

Seven Senses

See 
 the beauty 
 of the earth,
 starting with birth.

 Hear
 the roar
 of thunders voice,
 a child rejoice.

 Touch
 creation,
 water and sand,
 a loved one’s hand.

 Smell
 the wind
 and salty seas,
 honey from bees.

 Taste
 fresh fruits
 and apple crisp,
 loves sweet kiss.

 Feel 
 your neighbours 
 from the start,
 with open heart.
 

 Sense 
 others feelings
 before you begin,
 so all can win.

 11.28.2014
 Contest: Didactic 
2nd

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Paul Callus December 9, 2014 at 11:44 AM ...and back with merited congratulations, Brenda!!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma December 9, 2014 at 8:59 AM And back wid huge congrats on ur superb write n a super win!

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders December 8, 2014 at 9:34 PM Congrats, Brenda, on a wonderful win with these great words of wisdom! Yes, if we were all more sensitive to others, the world would be a kinder place!! Hugs, Rhonda

Dr.Ram Mehta December 8, 2014 at 8:24 PM Nicely done poem, congrats on the win

Joseph May December 8, 2014 at 5:18 PM Lovely write Brenda....congrats n your win

Kayod5 Kayode December 8, 2014 at 2:37 PM The Oracle has spoken,the crown is won;congrats on the win Brenda...huggs Brenda Meier-Hans December 8, 2014 at 4:22 PM Thank you Kayod5

Maurice Yvonne December 8, 2014 at 11:08 AM Congratulations on your win.

Maurice Yvonne December 8, 2014 at 11:06 AM Very creative attack to this challenge! Brenda Meier-Hans December 8, 2014 at 4:19 PM Thanks Maurice.

Carrie Richards December 8, 2014 at 10:16 AM The simplicity of such truths, is what moves me the most !! Lovely poem, Brenda !! Brenda Meier-Hans December 8, 2014 at 4:18 PM Thank you Carrie.

Regina Mcintosh December 8, 2014 at 9:45 AM I enjoyed your poem. Thank you for entering and May God bless you with love and prayers, Gina Brenda Meier-Hans December 8, 2014 at 4:15 PM Thanks so much Regina.

Sandra Haight December 8, 2014 at 9:37 AM Hi Brenda, I enjoyed your lovely poem about our wonderful senses and how we can use them to appreciate life. Congratulations on your win! Hugs, 7+Fav, Sandra Brenda Meier-Hans December 8, 2014 at 4:15 PM Thank you so much Sandra

Jan Allison December 8, 2014 at 7:54 AM dropping back with my congrats Brenda:-) hugs jan xx Brenda Meier-Hans December 8, 2014 at 4:14 PM Thank you Jan.

Rob Carmack December 8, 2014 at 2:34 AM Great placement for a great poem. Congrats. Brenda Meier-Hans December 8, 2014 at 4:13 PM Thanks Rob.

Sara Kendrick December 4, 2014 at 5:29 AM Very good use of the human's senses..God is good to bless us with all of these isn't he..Reads like a winner to me..Way to go.Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara Brenda Meier-Hans December 4, 2014 at 7:24 AM Thank you so much Sara

Jan Allison November 29, 2014 at 4:27 PM you touched all the sense here Brenda - outstanding write good luck:-) hugs jan xxx Brenda Meier-Hans November 29, 2014 at 7:04 PM Thank you Jan. My trusty friend.

Demetrios Trifiatis November 29, 2014 at 2:02 PM A very valuable lesson here loaded with deep knowledge that springs from a loving hear and a mind full of appreciation for life, dear Brenda! A seven , a must! Brenda Meier-Hans November 29, 2014 at 7:04 PM Thank you so very much Demetrios

David Meade November 29, 2014 at 10:45 AM I used all of my senses and feelings . . . it is awesome! a fav for me! Brenda Meier-Hans November 29, 2014 at 7:03 PM Thank you so much David.

Paul Callus November 29, 2014 at 7:50 AM I enjoyed your words of wisdom, Brenda! I am sure you have an excellent 6th sense, too! // paul Brenda Meier-Hans November 29, 2014 at 7:02 PM Yes Paul, My uncle I wrote about in my poem Forever Loved, taught us the last two senses very well. Thanks for your kind comment.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma November 29, 2014 at 7:43 AM Outstanding work Brenda ! Gl in contest! Brenda Meier-Hans November 29, 2014 at 6:57 PM Thanks Dr. Sharma

Shadow Hamilton November 29, 2014 at 4:34 AM superb Brenda you bring the seven senses to life gl in contest I hope this does well hugs 7 Brenda Meier-Hans November 29, 2014 at 6:57 PM Thank you Shadow.