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Seven Senses

See the beauty of the earth, starting with birth. Hear the roar of thunders voice, a child rejoice. Touch creation, water and sand, a loved one’s hand. Smell the wind and salty seas, honey from bees. Taste fresh fruits and apple crisp, loves sweet kiss. Feel your neighbours from the start, with open heart. Sense others feelings before you begin, so all can win. 11.28.2014 Contest: Didactic 2nd

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Date: 12/9/2014 11:44:00 AM
...and back with merited congratulations, Brenda!!
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Date: 12/9/2014 8:59:00 AM
And back wid huge congrats on ur superb write n a super win!
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Date: 12/8/2014 9:34:00 PM
Congrats, Brenda, on a wonderful win with these great words of wisdom! Yes, if we were all more sensitive to others, the world would be a kinder place!! Hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 12/8/2014 8:24:00 PM
Nicely done poem, congrats on the win
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Date: 12/8/2014 5:18:00 PM
Lovely write Brenda....congrats n your win
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Date: 12/8/2014 2:37:00 PM
The Oracle has spoken,the crown is won;congrats on the win Brenda...huggs
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 12/8/2014 4:22:00 PM
Thank you Kayod5
Date: 12/8/2014 11:08:00 AM
Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 12/8/2014 11:06:00 AM
Very creative attack to this challenge!
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 12/8/2014 4:19:00 PM
Thanks Maurice.
Date: 12/8/2014 10:16:00 AM
The simplicity of such truths, is what moves me the most !! Lovely poem, Brenda !!
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 12/8/2014 4:18:00 PM
Thank you Carrie.
Date: 12/8/2014 9:45:00 AM
I enjoyed your poem. Thank you for entering and May God bless you with love and prayers, Gina
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 12/8/2014 4:15:00 PM
Thanks so much Regina.
Date: 12/8/2014 9:37:00 AM
Hi Brenda, I enjoyed your lovely poem about our wonderful senses and how we can use them to appreciate life. Congratulations on your win! Hugs, 7+Fav, Sandra
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 12/8/2014 4:15:00 PM
Thank you so much Sandra
Date: 12/8/2014 7:54:00 AM
dropping back with my congrats Brenda:-) hugs jan xx
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 12/8/2014 4:14:00 PM
Thank you Jan.
Date: 12/8/2014 2:34:00 AM
Great placement for a great poem. Congrats.
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 12/8/2014 4:13:00 PM
Thanks Rob.
Date: 12/4/2014 5:29:00 AM
Very good use of the human's senses..God is good to bless us with all of these isn't he..Reads like a winner to me..Way to go.Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 12/4/2014 7:24:00 AM
Thank you so much Sara
Date: 11/29/2014 4:27:00 PM
you touched all the sense here Brenda - outstanding write good luck:-) hugs jan xxx
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/29/2014 7:04:00 PM
Thank you Jan. My trusty friend.
Date: 11/29/2014 2:02:00 PM
A very valuable lesson here loaded with deep knowledge that springs from a loving hear and a mind full of appreciation for life, dear Brenda! A seven , a must!
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/29/2014 7:04:00 PM
Thank you so very much Demetrios
Date: 11/29/2014 10:45:00 AM
I used all of my senses and feelings . . . it is awesome! a fav for me!
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/29/2014 7:03:00 PM
Thank you so much David.
Date: 11/29/2014 7:50:00 AM
I enjoyed your words of wisdom, Brenda! I am sure you have an excellent 6th sense, too! // paul
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/29/2014 7:02:00 PM
Yes Paul, My uncle I wrote about in my poem Forever Loved, taught us the last two senses very well. Thanks for your kind comment.
Date: 11/29/2014 7:43:00 AM
Outstanding work Brenda ! Gl in contest!
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/29/2014 6:57:00 PM
Thanks Dr. Sharma
Date: 11/29/2014 4:34:00 AM
superb Brenda you bring the seven senses to life gl in contest I hope this does well hugs 7
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/29/2014 6:57:00 PM
Thank you Shadow.