Vijay Pandit Poet Free verse

Seven Nightfall Images

Evening strolls on ruby beams

Fixing sights on skyline mauve,

Birds are singing joyous hymn

Breezing thrill of lilting trees,

Dusk is hosting lilac dreams

Blushing face of whirling winds;

Blessing night, moon is smiling.

May 16, 2020
Placed 2nd: Brian's Choice M contest
Placed 3rd: Finish line in seven poetry contest
Sponsor: Nette Onclaud
Theme # 3: Taste of nightfall
Seven syllables per line

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Valsa George January 11, 2022 at 4:23 AM Serene and magnificent arrival of dusk ! The very first line is so captivating!

Angela Crabtree November 9, 2020 at 12:57 PM Sounds like an enjoyable walk, Vijay :)

Janice Canerdy May 25, 2020 at 7:40 AM Again--you have created a majestic scenario, Vijay. Janice Vijay Pandit May 27, 2020 at 3:08 PM Thank you Janice--much appreciate.

Judy Ball May 23, 2020 at 2:43 PM Well done Vijay. Congrats. God Bless and stay well, JB Vijay Pandit May 23, 2020 at 3:11 PM Much appreciate Judy--many thanks.

Aditi Mishra May 19, 2020 at 11:22 PM Coming back to congratulate you on your splendid win. So happy to see your name there. Keep writing and inspiring :) Vijay Pandit May 21, 2020 at 6:58 AM Much appreciate, Aditi--many thanks.

Funom Makama May 19, 2020 at 7:03 AM Beautiful and witty. Words of gracious flow, developing extra limbs to double-embrace the mind. Vijay Pandit May 19, 2020 at 7:17 AM Much appreciate Funom--many thanks.

Jennifer Proxenos May 19, 2020 at 1:30 AM You bring this poem to life Vijay with a with your poetic flair for vibrancy. Well done my friend and good luck. Blessings, Jennifer. Vijay Pandit May 19, 2020 at 7:17 AM Thank you Jennifer. Much appreciate.

Connie Marcum Wong May 18, 2020 at 1:47 AM This is gorgeous Vijay! I can almost smell the lilacs. Blessings xxoo Vijay Pandit May 18, 2020 at 9:39 AM Much appreciate Connie--many thanks.

Andrea Dietrich May 17, 2020 at 8:45 PM Luscious! Vijay Pandit May 18, 2020 at 9:39 AM Thank you Andrea--much appreciate.

Regina Mcintosh May 17, 2020 at 8:15 PM This is quite beautiful and I enjoyed it immensely. Very creative indeed dear friend. God bless you with love, Gina Vijay Pandit May 18, 2020 at 9:39 AM Much appreciate, Regina--many thanks.

M. L. Kiser May 17, 2020 at 1:32 PM Wow, beautiful imagery in this. Good luck in the contest. Vijay Pandit May 18, 2020 at 9:37 AM Thank you MLK--much appreciate.

Silent One May 17, 2020 at 10:44 AM 7 lines of vivid imagery... Nette will love this one Vijay Pandit May 18, 2020 at 9:37 AM Thank you SO--much appreciate.

Tom Cunningham May 16, 2020 at 3:51 PM Stunning imagery Vijay, so much in seven lines. Good luck Tom Vijay Pandit May 16, 2020 at 4:09 PM So happy to read your comments, Tom. Much appreciate the compliments. Many thanks.

Anne-Lise Andresen May 16, 2020 at 2:51 PM - A wonderful smile ... good luck in the contest, Vijay :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Vijay Pandit May 16, 2020 at 4:08 PM Glad you liked the smiling moon. Much appreciate, Anne-Lise. Many thanks. Welcome back!

Darlene De Beaulieu May 16, 2020 at 2:37 PM Hello Vijayay Pandit, I like the the image of this poem. Have a nice day my friend. Darlene De Beaulieu May 17, 2020 at 12:25 PM You are welcome my friend. Enjoy your day. Vijay Pandit May 16, 2020 at 4:07 PM Much appreciate Darlene--many thanks.

Brandy Nicole May 16, 2020 at 1:59 PM When all the world is asleep, moments are calm and peaceful. Nighttime lingers and melody is soothing. Your words take me there. This is beautiful. :) Brandy Vijay Pandit May 16, 2020 at 4:06 PM Happy to read your feedback, as always, Brandy. Many thanks my friend. Much appreciate.

Aditi Mishra May 16, 2020 at 11:54 AM This is such a colourful image of the complete universe so beautifully penned by you. Really creative and soothing. All the best Vijay :) Vijay Pandit May 16, 2020 at 4:05 PM So very kind of you, Aditi. Much appreciate the kind remarks. Many thanks.

Quoth Theraven May 16, 2020 at 10:51 AM Vijay, So many fine writes finished in seven. This contest' outcome will prove interesting. -Richard Vijay Pandit May 16, 2020 at 4:04 PM Much appreciate, Richard--many thanks.

Arturo Michael May 16, 2020 at 9:45 AM Nicely put together...So good to see you creating...All the best Vijay Pandit May 16, 2020 at 4:04 PM Thank you Arturo--much appreciate.

Kim Rodrigues May 16, 2020 at 9:26 AM You are always the king of imagery! Vijay Pandit May 16, 2020 at 4:03 PM That is such a nice compliment, Kim. Much appreciate your visit and comments. Many thanks.

Jan Allison May 16, 2020 at 8:50 AM what lovely imagery Vijay, I too picked this theme:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx Vijay Pandit May 16, 2020 at 4:02 PM So very kind of you--much appreciate, Jan. Many thanks for your visit and comments.