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Seven Nightfall Images

Evening strolls on ruby beams Fixing sights on skyline mauve, Birds are singing joyous hymn Breezing thrill of lilting trees, Dusk is hosting lilac dreams Blushing face of whirling winds; Blessing night, moon is smiling. May 16, 2020 Placed 2nd: Brian's Choice M contest Placed 3rd: Finish line in seven poetry contest Sponsor: Nette Onclaud Theme # 3: Taste of nightfall Seven syllables per line

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Valsa George

Date: 1/11/2022 4:23:00 AM

Serene and magnificent arrival of dusk ! The very first line is so captivating!

Angela Crabtree

Date: 11/9/2020 12:57:00 PM

Sounds like an enjoyable walk, Vijay :)

Janice Canerdy

Date: 5/25/2020 7:40:00 AM

Again--you have created a majestic scenario, Vijay. Janice

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/27/2020 3:08:00 PM

Thank you Janice--much appreciate.

Judy Ball

Date: 5/23/2020 2:43:00 PM

Well done Vijay. Congrats. God Bless and stay well, JB

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/23/2020 3:11:00 PM

Much appreciate Judy--many thanks.

Aditi Mishra

Date: 5/19/2020 11:22:00 PM

Coming back to congratulate you on your splendid win. So happy to see your name there. Keep writing and inspiring :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/21/2020 6:58:00 AM

Much appreciate, Aditi--many thanks.

Funom Makama

Date: 5/19/2020 7:03:00 AM

Beautiful and witty. Words of gracious flow, developing extra limbs to double-embrace the mind.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/19/2020 7:17:00 AM

Much appreciate Funom--many thanks.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 5/19/2020 1:30:00 AM

You bring this poem to life Vijay with a with your poetic flair for vibrancy. Well done my friend and good luck. Blessings, Jennifer.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/19/2020 7:17:00 AM

Thank you Jennifer. Much appreciate.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/18/2020 1:47:00 AM

This is gorgeous Vijay! I can almost smell the lilacs. Blessings xxoo

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/18/2020 9:39:00 AM

Much appreciate Connie--many thanks.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/17/2020 8:45:00 PM

Luscious!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/18/2020 9:39:00 AM

Thank you Andrea--much appreciate.

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 5/17/2020 8:15:00 PM

This is quite beautiful and I enjoyed it immensely. Very creative indeed dear friend. God bless you with love, Gina

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/18/2020 9:39:00 AM

Much appreciate, Regina--many thanks.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 5/17/2020 1:32:00 PM

Wow, beautiful imagery in this. Good luck in the contest.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/18/2020 9:37:00 AM

Thank you MLK--much appreciate.

Silent One

Date: 5/17/2020 10:44:00 AM

7 lines of vivid imagery... Nette will love this one

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/18/2020 9:37:00 AM

Thank you SO--much appreciate.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/16/2020 3:51:00 PM

Stunning imagery Vijay, so much in seven lines. Good luck Tom

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/16/2020 4:09:00 PM

So happy to read your comments, Tom. Much appreciate the compliments. Many thanks.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/16/2020 2:51:00 PM

- A wonderful smile ... good luck in the contest, Vijay :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/16/2020 4:08:00 PM

Glad you liked the smiling moon. Much appreciate, Anne-Lise. Many thanks. Welcome back!

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 5/16/2020 2:37:00 PM

Hello Vijayay Pandit, I like the the image of this poem. Have a nice day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/17/2020 12:25:00 PM

You are welcome my friend. Enjoy your day.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/16/2020 4:07:00 PM

Much appreciate Darlene--many thanks.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 5/16/2020 1:59:00 PM

When all the world is asleep, moments are calm and peaceful. Nighttime lingers and melody is soothing. Your words take me there. This is beautiful. :) Brandy

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/16/2020 4:06:00 PM

Happy to read your feedback, as always, Brandy. Many thanks my friend. Much appreciate.

Aditi Mishra

Date: 5/16/2020 11:54:00 AM

This is such a colourful image of the complete universe so beautifully penned by you. Really creative and soothing. All the best Vijay :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/16/2020 4:05:00 PM

So very kind of you, Aditi. Much appreciate the kind remarks. Many thanks.

Quoth Theraven

Date: 5/16/2020 10:51:00 AM

Vijay, So many fine writes finished in seven. This contest' outcome will prove interesting. -Richard

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/16/2020 4:04:00 PM

Much appreciate, Richard--many thanks.

Arturo Michael

Date: 5/16/2020 9:45:00 AM

Nicely put together...So good to see you creating...All the best

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/16/2020 4:04:00 PM

Thank you Arturo--much appreciate.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/16/2020 9:26:00 AM

You are always the king of imagery!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/16/2020 4:03:00 PM

That is such a nice compliment, Kim. Much appreciate your visit and comments. Many thanks.

Jan Allison

Date: 5/16/2020 8:50:00 AM

what lovely imagery Vijay, I too picked this theme:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/16/2020 4:02:00 PM

So very kind of you--much appreciate, Jan. Many thanks for your visit and comments.