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Seven Nightfall Images

Evening strolls on ruby beams

Fixing sights on skyline mauve,

Birds are singing joyous hymn

Breezing thrill of lilting trees,

Dusk is hosting lilac dreams

Blushing face of whirling winds;

Blessing night, moon is smiling.

May 16, 2020
Placed 2nd: Brian's Choice M contest
Placed 3rd: Finish line in seven poetry contest
Sponsor: Nette Onclaud
Theme # 3: Taste of nightfall
Seven syllables per line

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Valsa George Date: 1/11/2022 4:23:00 AM Serene and magnificent arrival of dusk ! The very first line is so captivating! Login to Reply

Angela Crabtree Date: 11/9/2020 12:57:00 PM Sounds like an enjoyable walk, Vijay :) Login to Reply

Janice Canerdy Date: 5/25/2020 7:40:00 AM Again--you have created a majestic scenario, Vijay. Janice Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 5/27/2020 3:08:00 PM Thank you Janice--much appreciate.

Judy Ball Date: 5/23/2020 2:43:00 PM Well done Vijay. Congrats. God Bless and stay well, JB Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 5/23/2020 3:11:00 PM Much appreciate Judy--many thanks.

Aditi Mishra Date: 5/19/2020 11:22:00 PM Coming back to congratulate you on your splendid win. So happy to see your name there. Keep writing and inspiring :) Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 5/21/2020 6:58:00 AM Much appreciate, Aditi--many thanks.

Funom Makama Date: 5/19/2020 7:03:00 AM Beautiful and witty. Words of gracious flow, developing extra limbs to double-embrace the mind. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 5/19/2020 7:17:00 AM Much appreciate Funom--many thanks.

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 5/19/2020 1:30:00 AM You bring this poem to life Vijay with a with your poetic flair for vibrancy. Well done my friend and good luck. Blessings, Jennifer. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 5/19/2020 7:17:00 AM Thank you Jennifer. Much appreciate.

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 5/18/2020 1:47:00 AM This is gorgeous Vijay! I can almost smell the lilacs. Blessings xxoo Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 5/18/2020 9:39:00 AM Much appreciate Connie--many thanks.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/17/2020 8:45:00 PM Luscious! Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 5/18/2020 9:39:00 AM Thank you Andrea--much appreciate.

Regina Mcintosh Date: 5/17/2020 8:15:00 PM This is quite beautiful and I enjoyed it immensely. Very creative indeed dear friend. God bless you with love, Gina Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 5/18/2020 9:39:00 AM Much appreciate, Regina--many thanks.

M. L. Kiser Date: 5/17/2020 1:32:00 PM Wow, beautiful imagery in this. Good luck in the contest. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 5/18/2020 9:37:00 AM Thank you MLK--much appreciate.

Silent One Date: 5/17/2020 10:44:00 AM 7 lines of vivid imagery... Nette will love this one Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 5/18/2020 9:37:00 AM Thank you SO--much appreciate.

Tom Cunningham Date: 5/16/2020 3:51:00 PM Stunning imagery Vijay, so much in seven lines. Good luck Tom Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 5/16/2020 4:09:00 PM So happy to read your comments, Tom. Much appreciate the compliments. Many thanks.

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/16/2020 2:51:00 PM - A wonderful smile ... good luck in the contest, Vijay :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 5/16/2020 4:08:00 PM Glad you liked the smiling moon. Much appreciate, Anne-Lise. Many thanks. Welcome back!

Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 5/16/2020 2:37:00 PM Hello Vijayay Pandit, I like the the image of this poem. Have a nice day my friend. Login to Reply Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 5/17/2020 12:25:00 PM You are welcome my friend. Enjoy your day. Vijay Pandit Date: 5/16/2020 4:07:00 PM Much appreciate Darlene--many thanks.

Brandy Nicole Date: 5/16/2020 1:59:00 PM When all the world is asleep, moments are calm and peaceful. Nighttime lingers and melody is soothing. Your words take me there. This is beautiful. :) Brandy Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 5/16/2020 4:06:00 PM Happy to read your feedback, as always, Brandy. Many thanks my friend. Much appreciate.

Aditi Mishra Date: 5/16/2020 11:54:00 AM This is such a colourful image of the complete universe so beautifully penned by you. Really creative and soothing. All the best Vijay :) Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 5/16/2020 4:05:00 PM So very kind of you, Aditi. Much appreciate the kind remarks. Many thanks.

Quoth Theraven Date: 5/16/2020 10:51:00 AM Vijay, So many fine writes finished in seven. This contest' outcome will prove interesting. -Richard Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 5/16/2020 4:04:00 PM Much appreciate, Richard--many thanks.

Arturo Michael Date: 5/16/2020 9:45:00 AM Nicely put together...So good to see you creating...All the best Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 5/16/2020 4:04:00 PM Thank you Arturo--much appreciate.

Kim Rodrigues Date: 5/16/2020 9:26:00 AM You are always the king of imagery! Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 5/16/2020 4:03:00 PM That is such a nice compliment, Kim. Much appreciate your visit and comments. Many thanks.

Jan Allison Date: 5/16/2020 8:50:00 AM what lovely imagery Vijay, I too picked this theme:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 5/16/2020 4:02:00 PM So very kind of you--much appreciate, Jan. Many thanks for your visit and comments.