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Seven Gallant Arches

Midnight moonbows whet the lake; Halo whirlpools swirl and swirl. A little boy’s paper boats Spur on his dreams, near and far. Set their course, they will find her And in turn she’s christening Panlike path of make believe. 5/14/2020 FINISH LINE IN SEVEN Poetry Contest Sponsor: Nette Onclaud Theme #2

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Date: 5/19/2020 11:31:00 PM
This is so soothing with the hidden emotions. Congratulations Kim :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/20/2020 7:51:00 AM
Thank you, Aditi!
Date: 5/17/2020 5:28:00 PM
Beautiful poem, penned by a beautiful soul! Best to you! Panagiota xoxo
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/18/2020 3:28:00 PM
Thank you <3 Kim
Date: 5/16/2020 4:58:00 PM
Those paper boats float beautifully in your splendid words, Kim. All the best!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/16/2020 5:48:00 PM
Thank you, Vijay!
Date: 5/16/2020 11:38:00 AM
splendid Kim...lush and dreamy :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/16/2020 3:21:00 PM
Thank you, David!
Date: 5/16/2020 10:19:00 AM
What a lovely take on paper boat and the dreams that emerge. Best. Mohan
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/16/2020 3:21:00 PM
Thank you, Mohan!
Date: 5/16/2020 6:38:00 AM
Your ending line makes me wish I had never chosen the boy with the paper boats to write about!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/16/2020 9:06:00 AM
:) <3
Date: 5/15/2020 11:21:00 PM
Beautifully penned!! Amazing view through the mind's eye. :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/16/2020 9:06:00 AM
Thank you, Swetha!
Date: 5/15/2020 9:42:00 PM
very cleverly done, Kim. Nette's constest is inspiring such great poetry.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/16/2020 9:00:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea!
Date: 5/15/2020 7:07:00 PM
I agree with Gershon. She is sure to love this unique poem Kim. Outstanding! xxoo
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/15/2020 8:42:00 PM
Thank you, my friend! :)
Date: 5/15/2020 1:49:00 PM
Delightful and delicious! nette will love it! :) Gershon
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/15/2020 3:42:00 PM
Thank you, dear poet!
Date: 5/14/2020 10:54:00 PM
Oh well done Kim. I love this. In my mind's eye I could see a sleeping boy sailing away on his make believe boat to dreamland. God Bless and stay well. JB
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/14/2020 10:55:00 PM
Thank you so much! Be safe and healthy!

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