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Seven For Chaos and Order --- Drama

CLASSROOM DRAMA Children running about, climbing over all the chairs, Two boys fighting in a corner, another one stares, Girls giggling and talking gaily as if who cares, Some of them scribbling on the blackboard - the noisy din scares. I watch the scene silently, standing near the door, Five full minutes before they notice me, thus ending the uproar, I walk in. All stand shamefacedly. Peace is restored. 01.28.17 For contest : Seven for chaos and order Sponsor : Nette Onclaud

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Date: 2/2/2017 2:21:00 PM
Congrats!!! Jo...'chaos' indeed lol...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 2/1/2017 6:57:00 PM
An outstanding presentation of 'chaos' and 'order' in your poem, Jo! Congratulations on your fine placement. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 2/1/2017 5:20:00 PM
Hehehe. I feel nostalgic now, remembering my childhood days in school.... Congrats Jo, for your placement in the contest!!! ;-)
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Date: 2/1/2017 11:37:00 AM
You brought back our memories of old school days. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 2/1/2017 10:21:00 AM
ohh, i can relate to this helter-skelter scene, not to mention my own college students' disruptive gadgets... tough silence works, jo... best congrats on your great win and thanks for supporting this challenge..huggs
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Date: 2/2/2017 12:15:00 AM
Thank you, Nette:) never expected this win:) all glory be to God:)
Date: 2/1/2017 10:06:00 AM
Congrats on a fine win Jo
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Date: 1/29/2017 7:26:00 PM
Awesome! When the teacher leaves, the children play...lol
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Date: 1/29/2017 10:11:00 AM
JO, we had a teacher in High School who would stand before the class chaos and shout "I DEMAND PANDEMONIUM!".....We would all return to our seats and sit quietly......
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Date: 1/28/2017 1:57:00 PM
Classrooms are often chaotic until the teacher arrives...Great write Jo..
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Date: 1/28/2017 12:04:00 PM
My ending will be much different!!
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Date: 1/28/2017 12:03:00 PM
Jo you just gave me a great idea for how to do one of these. RElated to SCHOOL kids. Worst day of my life substitute teaching!! Love your take on this theme!!
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Date: 1/28/2017 8:39:00 AM
Hi Jo, This is good. I used to volunteer at my kids school. So I'm familar with this type of chaos. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
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Date: 1/28/2017 8:17:00 AM
Ruler in hand Mother Jo. Well done...
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Date: 1/28/2017 7:51:00 AM
Ha ha, great story telling. I love it!
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