Setting Sun

In the golden
reflection dancing
upon waters
listening to loves music
Rippling sounds
playing enchantingly 
in a sweet beautiful tune

Plucking upon the strings
an inner soft voice
like a songbird 
stirring red
the passion 
in ones soul

Holding hands out
will you please
dance with me 
in life's emotion
with a dream

Upon the water crest 
dancing in ripples
a fluttering heartbeat
holding close
clasping hands

We walk 
into the sun setting
a beautiful horizon shines
in loves shadow
golden paradise

Embarking on 
life's journey
into the sunset
hand and hand
as one
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Andresen Avatar
August 22, 2013 at 5:28 PM
- Is completely agree with the first comments ..... BEAUTIFUL! -oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Mcdaid Avatar
August 23, 2013 at 5:35 AM
anne lise thank you from the heart beautiful comment appreciated deeply
Chircop Avatar
August 21, 2013 at 2:29 PM
It can't get more beautiful..Well done and Welcome to poetrysoup-Charma
Mcdaid Avatar
August 22, 2013 at 4:19 AM
thank you for the wonderful comment beautiful deeply appreciated
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