Session of Out On the Porch

Heavy frost has touched the leaves and ground
Elephant Ears are frozen brown
Pears profusely lay upon the ground
Not turned into preserves or spice jam

Gourds are hanging green upon vines
That have died and turned brown
Signs of winter approach without a sound
Ginko still green even though frost coats it leaves

Holly stands tall with red berries in green
Crow still caws from post in woods 
Life goes on even if not understood 
The Running Rose hangs loaded with buds and blooms

When the sun warms the air will the Rose still bloom
Or will they all turn brown on their lovely face
And then fall to the ground 
No they were spared this round

Out on the cold, cold porch
To commune with nature and God
One more time for this time of praise
One more time for this time of peace

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 11/23/2010 6:23:00 AM
ok my marigolds are brown at the base but the blooms are still bright but fading.
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Date: 11/22/2010 10:28:00 AM
Sara, I could picture the whole scene while reading your piece, awesome visuals of your porch and the thankfulness to experience God's brilliance..
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Date: 11/21/2010 6:10:00 PM
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Date: 11/21/2010 9:26:00 AM
I think it is like a sanctuary to relax and enjoy, Sara
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Date: 11/21/2010 5:51:00 AM
This is a very beautiful poem Sara. I read your blog and it was this problem I was talking about.
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Date: 11/20/2010 8:36:00 PM
Soup Mail Sara..
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Date: 11/20/2010 2:06:00 PM
sounds like a relaxing place to be! :)
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Date: 11/20/2010 11:33:00 AM
Seeing the exact same picture from my own porch today Sara.. a lovely painting u have created with your elegant words my friend... SOUP MAIL... HAPPY THANKSGIVING.. with luv..
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Date: 11/20/2010 9:22:00 AM
Love of nature one of my favorite subjects. We are down with lots of snow and it stormed the last few days. Today is finally clear but very cold. yesterday was cold that it pinched my nostrils and the car would hardly turn over. It was -22 C . I am glad to be in a warm house today. I love the poem . God Bless Phyl
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Date: 11/20/2010 9:12:00 AM
very good commentary on nature and it's changes with the approach of winter..take care~deb
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Date: 11/20/2010 8:23:00 AM
Fear not, the roses always return in spring, Sara. Moving the bulbs will help the elephant ears "spring" back to vibrant beauty as well. When we are surrounded by nature, it seems so natural to offer praise. A lovely write! Wishing you peace and blessings for Thanksgiving, Carolyn
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Date: 11/20/2010 8:03:00 AM
So lovely to read this, Sara. Every lines tell its story of how natures behave to the calling. I like the two last line: One more time for this time of praise and One more time for this time of peace. We are hungry for these. (^_^) Noel.
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Date: 11/20/2010 6:44:00 AM
Many thnx Sara for reading my composition and endorsing flow of holy thoughts...yes world can be better place to live in and love in........... your comments are truly encouraging Luv/Best wishes......Hitendra Mehta
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