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Series Haiku of This Storm

Haiku of this storm (2/10/21, for Jim) February ice fear forecasts no motion — a tear starts its fall pup’s eyes plead with her legs splayed — deck wood freezes worst wintry front pushing through outside my winter body lullaby poems come invading sleep my tongue forgets how to speak snow clouds break deafening silence my sighs echo all frozen trees creaking in winds the stars do not know snow plays, today ice threatened— bird feeder untouched white lace from trees white doilies cover the ground these prayers, these dreams ————————————————————- (c) sally young eslinger2/10/21 ————————————————————-

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Date: 2/12/2021 6:00:00 AM
eight wintry gems, sally, love them all. good luck in contest.
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Sally Eslinger
Date: 3/13/2021 2:38:00 PM
Hi Harry. You gift me with your comment. I didn’t know there was a contest.
Date: 2/11/2021 4:11:00 AM
This is my favorite: snow clouds break deafening silence my sighs echo Love them all though God bless you with love and prayers, Gina
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Sally Eslinger
Date: 3/13/2021 2:36:00 PM
Many thanks, Regina. My broken pad puts me far behind in checking comments. Bless you! Colorful hugs!
Date: 2/11/2021 1:41:00 AM
excellent the poetic haiku series
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Sally Eslinger
Date: 3/13/2021 2:33:00 PM
Hello, Maytag. Thank you for stopping by to read and comment. Your words mean much to me.
Date: 2/10/2021 11:26:00 PM
Lovely written haiku. One can feel the cold. I like intense poems. ~~
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Sally Eslinger
Date: 3/13/2021 2:30:00 PM
Victor, many thanks! My old iPad with my whole life on it died and had to get a new one that I am still trying to figure out a week later. Hugs! sally
Date: 2/10/2021 7:44:00 PM
Winter is totally delightful in these lines Sally. Both you and duplicated a poem in a row yesterday. I think you may want to eliminate some lines. I already fixed mine.
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Sally Eslinger
Date: 2/10/2021 9:17:00 PM
OMG! Thank you, Caren! Took me half hour to clean that up! Wonder how it happened? I had some troubles yesterday too & it Always resets the line breaks on my prose poems! Aargh! I think being born in Jan. helps me like winter. I am dazzled by number of poets who love snow and relate to trees. Thanks again. Best to u!

Book: Shattered Sighs