Premiere Contest WinnerSerenity Stream

In realms of peace I do release for my thoughts reveal their pathos
In a melancholy state a wasted weight I encroach the chronic chaos
As unpredictable I am invincible a valiant warrior to keep serenity
Forevermore in search of calm a poetic psalm an ambient amenity

And thus I walk and tastily talk thru natures floral flourishing fields
Above azure skies that fill my eyes with wonder and youthful yields
Then in a gloaming graze like a crystal haze I fall asleep by rivers side
Frosted dreams near river streams sprinkles of Angels as they stride.




Aug.09.2017
Eight word challenge
Sponsored by: John Hamilton

1.Crystal 2.Gloaming 3.Frosted 4. Forevermore 5. Pathos 6. Valiant 7. Melancholy  8. Unpredictable

Illustration by same poet...markers and some acrylics...a quick rendering...
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Wood Avatar
August 20, 2017 at 12:14 PM
Congratulations on your 1st place win in this contest WW.
Warrior Avatar
August 21, 2017 at 7:03 AM
Thank you Dean...god bless...^WW^
Ashley Avatar
August 19, 2017 at 8:03 PM
Congratulations on your 1st place win WW for this truly spectacular poem!! :)
Warrior Avatar
August 21, 2017 at 7:02 AM
Thank you so much, Susan...
Hamilton Avatar
August 19, 2017 at 7:14 PM
This was amazing WW, you got me with the internal rhyme, just spectacular writing, congrats on another number 1 win!
Warrior Avatar
August 21, 2017 at 7:00 AM
Thank you, dear friend...I love your contests, John...I'm finally winning lol...god bless...^WW^
Ashley Avatar
August 11, 2017 at 8:55 PM
WW, gorgeous poetic images and beautiful illustration to match. I loved both! Good luck in the contest :)
Warrior Avatar
August 21, 2017 at 6:58 AM
Thank you so much Susan...god bless...^WW^
Kiser Avatar
August 9, 2017 at 10:18 PM
Quite a beautiful, serene poem; love the artwork and if that's a quick rendering...can't hardly wait to see one you've put hours into.
Warrior Avatar
August 9, 2017 at 10:32 PM
Thank you, my friend...only because you asked...check out "Endless Love"..."Reflections in Twilight" and "A Poets Prayer II-'Oh Holy Night"...with the help of Angels anything is possible...they told me to include their name lol...god bless...^WW^
Onclaud Avatar
August 9, 2017 at 12:15 PM
WW, such glorious depiction of solace well done... fly on!..huggs
Warrior Avatar
August 9, 2017 at 10:26 PM
Thank you nette, my friend...god bless...^WW^
Sivey Avatar
August 9, 2017 at 11:08 AM
This is a fantastic entry into the contest! You have written a fabulous poem here WW! I surely loved reading this illustrious piece this afternoon, such a graceful poem, Great Work!!
Warrior Avatar
August 9, 2017 at 10:25 PM
Thank you kindly, Russell...god bless...^WW^
Hopper Avatar
August 9, 2017 at 10:32 AM
Love, love, love this!
Warrior Avatar
August 9, 2017 at 10:24 PM
Thank, thank, thank you...Anna...god bless...^WW^
Michelle Avatar
August 9, 2017 at 9:13 AM
Great write, good luck in the contest! :) Love, Juli-Michelle
Warrior Avatar
August 9, 2017 at 10:22 PM
Thank you Juli-Michelle...god bless...^WW^
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