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Serenity Stream

In realms of peace I do release for my thoughts reveal their pathos In a melancholy state a wasted weight I encroach the chronic chaos As unpredictable I am invincible a valiant warrior to keep serenity Forevermore in search of calm a poetic psalm an ambient amenity And thus I walk and tastily talk thru natures floral flourishing fields Above azure skies that fill my eyes with wonder and youthful yields Then in a gloaming graze like a crystal haze I fall asleep by rivers side Frosted dreams near river streams sprinkles of Angels as they stride. Aug.09.2017 Eight word challenge Sponsored by: John Hamilton 1.Crystal 2.Gloaming 3.Frosted 4. Forevermore 5. Pathos 6. Valiant 7. Melancholy 8. Unpredictable Illustration by same poet...markers and some acrylics...a quick rendering...

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Dean Wood

Date: 8/20/2017 12:14:00 PM

Congratulations on your 1st place win in this contest WW.

Winged Warrior
Date: 8/21/2017 7:03:00 AM

Thank you Dean...god bless...^WW^

Susan Ashley

Date: 8/19/2017 8:03:00 PM

Congratulations on your 1st place win WW for this truly spectacular poem!! :)

Winged Warrior
Date: 8/21/2017 7:02:00 AM

Thank you so much, Susan...

John Hamilton

Date: 8/19/2017 7:14:00 PM

This was amazing WW, you got me with the internal rhyme, just spectacular writing, congrats on another number 1 win!

Winged Warrior
Date: 8/21/2017 7:00:00 AM

Thank you, dear friend...I love your contests, John...I'm finally winning lol...god bless...^WW^

Susan Ashley

Date: 8/11/2017 8:55:00 PM

WW, gorgeous poetic images and beautiful illustration to match. I loved both! Good luck in the contest :)

Winged Warrior
Date: 8/21/2017 6:58:00 AM

Thank you so much Susan...god bless...^WW^

M. L. Kiser

Date: 8/9/2017 10:18:00 PM

Quite a beautiful, serene poem; love the artwork and if that's a quick rendering...can't hardly wait to see one you've put hours into.

Winged Warrior
Date: 8/9/2017 10:32:00 PM

Thank you, my friend...only because you asked...check out "Endless Love"..."Reflections in Twilight" and "A Poets Prayer II-'Oh Holy Night"...with the help of Angels anything is possible...they told me to include their name lol...god bless...^WW^

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/9/2017 12:15:00 PM

WW, such glorious depiction of solace well done... fly on!..huggs

Winged Warrior
Date: 8/9/2017 10:26:00 PM

Thank you nette, my friend...god bless...^WW^

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/9/2017 11:08:00 AM

This is a fantastic entry into the contest! You have written a fabulous poem here WW! I surely loved reading this illustrious piece this afternoon, such a graceful poem, Great Work!!

Winged Warrior
Date: 8/9/2017 10:25:00 PM

Thank you kindly, Russell...god bless...^WW^

Anna Hopper

Date: 8/9/2017 10:32:00 AM

Love, love, love this!

Winged Warrior
Date: 8/9/2017 10:24:00 PM

Thank, thank, thank you...Anna...god bless...^WW^

Juli- Michelle

Date: 8/9/2017 9:13:00 AM

Great write, good luck in the contest! :) Love, Juli-Michelle

Winged Warrior
Date: 8/9/2017 10:22:00 PM

Thank you Juli-Michelle...god bless...^WW^