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Written on April 17th 2025 for Constance La France's Prompt 12 Beautiful Lines

c r e s t f a l l e n lapis lazuli w a v e s lap against pearlized ivory shores strands of forest-green s e a w e e d dot the beachside as an i r i d e s c e n t sunset d i p s over the shrinking horizon s p r i n k l i n g its dwindling rays over the dunes fragrances of beach rose dance playfully in the b r e e z e saline-infused mist tantalizes the tongue whilst s i l k e n sand slumbers beneath my feet embers ignite like lightning bugs from a roaring bonfire the majestic call of gulls s a i l s amongst the flames nature's eloquent beauty envelops a drained h e a r t breathing new life into an ancient soul an oasis under kaleidoscopic stellar evolution

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Date: 4/21/2025 7:07:00 AM
Lovely imagery Sara. Congratulations! :)
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Sara Jama
Date: 4/21/2025 7:43:00 AM
Thank you so much.
Date: 4/18/2025 12:34:00 AM
Absolutely mesmerising. Your vivid imagery transports me right to that beach. Such a beautiful written reminder of nature’s rejuvenating power. One of my faves of your my Onyx Rose
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Sara Jama
Date: 4/18/2025 5:51:00 AM
Thank you very much my love.
Date: 4/17/2025 8:22:00 PM
Beautiful poetry here!
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Sara Jama
Date: 4/18/2025 5:50:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 4/17/2025 4:27:00 PM
Your beautiful poem Sara is a cut above the rest. lovely entry gl in the contest.
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Sara Jama
Date: 4/17/2025 5:19:00 PM
Thank you very much.
Date: 4/17/2025 7:59:00 AM
I have to say, these are truly beautiful lines. Breathtaking
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Sara Jama
Date: 4/17/2025 8:02:00 AM
Thank you very much.

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