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Serenity In Afternoon Love

We met and talked coffee after coffee he was very masculine said, I was beautiful our hands touched and caressed later, we pulled the curtains closed our lips touching our hands exploring skin finding serenity in afternoon love ___________________________ June 21, 2019 Poetry/Romanticism/Serenity in Afternoon Love Copyright Protected, ID 19-1159-176-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Submitted to Your Choice (12) Love Verse sponsor, Brian Strand Third Place

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John Gondolf

Date: 6/22/2019 11:09:00 AM

Congrats on your win, Constance, I like the simplicity of your poem. Reminds me of the song "Afternoon Delight." John

Constance La France
Date: 6/23/2019 2:53:00 PM

John, thanks for the congrats, it seems to remind people of songs and movies, but it is all me from a distant sweet memory ~

L. J. Carber

Date: 6/22/2019 9:45:00 AM

Congrats on your win, D.H! [The poem reminds me of the movie, 'Love in the Afternoon']

Constance La France
Date: 6/23/2019 2:54:00 PM

LJ, thanks for the congrats, never saw that movie but the poem is all me, from a memory of a serene afternoon once upon a time ~