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Serenity Awakened

Written: September 12, 2023 ________________________________________________________________ Blinded moments pass Mist rises, surf tumbles on~ Dreams awake, enticed Heartbeat near the blaze Sunshine through feathery clouds~ Breath of peace, serene Falling dew, life's hush Silencing the coolness, calm~ Awakening serenity
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Magdalinos Avatar
September 19, 2023 at 6:36 AM
Dear Sotto, beautiful crafted Haikus!! My friend,Have a blessed day!
Kendrick Avatar
September 13, 2023 at 1:59 PM
Ahh!! A beautiful island getaway aptly described in poetic phrases. Thank you for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page to let me know that I placed in your contest. I appreciate the honor of being on the list. Sara
Sands Avatar
September 13, 2023 at 8:19 AM
Perfect! So peaceful, my friend. :)
Sharma  Avatar
September 13, 2023 at 7:04 AM
This strolls in the most elegant dreamscapes of soul searching and just as the silver haze of mystery clears, bright amber rays of golden sun shine in soft shimmer, and the moon arcs in ivory spheres, both enveloping the soul in bright aura of whimsical emotions.. Such is the feeling of this poem.. "Heartbeat near the blaze, Sunshine through feathery clouds~Breath of peace, serene" Beyond ethereal! "Mist rises, surf tumbles on", "silencing the coolness" You've said so much within such few words
Andresen Avatar
September 13, 2023 at 5:57 AM
- This is the answer to why I love haiku poems ... one says so much with few words ... (although the feelings can be different, from writer to reader) - love it, Las :) - hugs
Empress Avatar
September 12, 2023 at 10:37 PM
Such beautiful imagery throughout your word weaving. I really love how this flows with such serenity and calmness. You really write haiku so well. Especially “ mist rises , surf tumbles on “ sunshine through feathery clouds” “ awakening serenity” how soul warming is this! Absolutely gorgeous. So descriptive and delicately profound
Volumes Avatar
September 12, 2023 at 10:29 PM
This is truly beautiful SP. A favorite and fingers crossed for a deserved Poem of the day ! I am sure others will see it that way.
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