Serenity Awakened

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Written: September 12, 2023
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Blinded moments pass
Mist rises, surf tumbles on~
Dreams awake, enticed

Heartbeat near the blaze
Sunshine through feathery clouds~
Breath of peace, serene

Falling dew, life's hush
Silencing the coolness, calm~
Awakening serenity

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Mulu Magdalinos

Date: 9/19/2023 6:36:00 AM

Dear Sotto, beautiful crafted Haikus!! My friend,Have a blessed day!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/13/2023 1:59:00 PM

Ahh!! A beautiful island getaway aptly described in poetic phrases. Thank you for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page to let me know that I placed in your contest. I appreciate the honor of being on the list. Sara

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/13/2023 8:19:00 AM

Perfect! So peaceful, my friend. :)

Hiya Sharma

Date: 9/13/2023 7:04:00 AM

This strolls in the most elegant dreamscapes of soul searching and just as the silver haze of mystery clears, bright amber rays of golden sun shine in soft shimmer, and the moon arcs in ivory spheres, both enveloping the soul in bright aura of whimsical emotions.. Such is the feeling of this poem.. "Heartbeat near the blaze, Sunshine through feathery clouds~Breath of peace, serene" Beyond ethereal! "Mist rises, surf tumbles on", "silencing the coolness" You've said so much within such few words

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/13/2023 5:57:00 AM

- This is the answer to why I love haiku poems ... one says so much with few words ... (although the feelings can be different, from writer to reader) - love it, Las :) - hugs

Ink Empress

Date: 9/12/2023 10:37:00 PM

Such beautiful imagery throughout your word weaving. I really love how this flows with such serenity and calmness. You really write haiku so well. Especially “ mist rises , surf tumbles on “ sunshine through feathery clouds” “ awakening serenity” how soul warming is this! Absolutely gorgeous. So descriptive and delicately profound